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July 19th, 2007, 08:11 am
ya
um i like music and poetry
so i thought i might post some here...
ya

hope u guys like it....

it wasnt

by juno kim

the sound of screaming in the night

it could of been the wind

but it wasnt

the darkness spread across the sky

it could of been a storm

but it wasnt

the cry from the man next door

it could of been pain

but it wasnt

the tears of a boy who has lost too much

it could of been rain

it could of been sweat

it could have been anything else

but it wasnt

it was tears

and i knew it


and another....


where were you
by juno kim

where were you
when i was dead
and no one was by me
pain
i called out your name
you chose to stay silent
i asked you to come
you chose to stay still
i was alone and in pain
where were you
when i had nobody
when no one listened
when i couldnt speak
i was alone and in pain
where were you
when i was crying
alone
in the cold
watching the rain
watching me die
in the mirror
everyday
i was alone and in pain
where were you
i know
you were far from me
when i needed you
you werent there
when i screamed your name
you never were there
you never stayed
empty promises
sweet nothings
but i dont need you
you weren't there
where was i?

alone
in the
dark

waiting
for
you

i like that one

and of course my favorite,
my tanka that is my signature

ya
im a tortured soul kinda
but i find reasons to smile everyday
:)

HanTony
July 19th, 2007, 10:03 am
Not bad, not bad at all but we already have a thread for everyones poems.