I haven't composed for a long time now, and the thread I had has dissapeared (?) because no one had written in it for a while. But now I need to practise Forte and Piano on piano, so I thought I could compose something simple to practise.

It's not finished, maybe... I might change it in the near future. I guess I don't know and I might put another instrument in there, if I feel like it...

It's pretty simple and the bass is kinda repetive, i guess... But I can't think of anything else right now and I just let one feeling out when I composed this: My love for the friends i have made after being alone for ten years with only ones family as friends. So I actually was thinking about the happy times I remember in my life. I guess I'm too deep sometimes :bleh:

I liked it. Although the chord progression was a little too predictable. In measures 12 and 20 the B in the melody collides with the C in the left hand, creating a weird dissonance. I don't know if this was intentional, but overall it was good =]

So this is a piano etude for yourself to practise? If so, that explains why you have suddenly taken quite a few steps back from where you were earlier. As a standalone-composition, this doesn't really make the cut... but you're aware of that too I'm sure :]

@ Noir7: Yeah, it's a piano etude for myself. And my friend, if she wants to use it.
And thinking how tired I am... and how much pain I am in... I guess I wouldn't be able to compose much better than this... I wasn't in constant pain before, so I could concentrate on composing...
Yeah i know... It won't make tha cut as a standalone-composition, that's why i might put a flute or violin with it. it depens on if I will start to play the violin or not and if I will be able to play flute in the future or if I'm too sick for it.

@ Giles: It was intetional, the C and Bb. Sorry if it's predictable. I don't actually care if it's predictable, when It's just an etude for myself and for the last week I've only played a lot of predictable stuff so I might got that stuck in my head.

Yes, as Noir stated before, it was a little too simple to be enjoyed. However, you seem to have a fair sense of harmony. Which is a good thing. You should try to write a piece with more complex counterpoint.

I will, someday before I die. I hope. I would need more time then, it's something I won't have for a while now. And medicine, for my lungs, I guess. We'll see what i do next time. ^_^