OK! I worked hard on this, it's the first movement (allegro con brio), of a piano sonata I've been writing ( next two movements to follow shortly) :D

I think, considering the style of music, this would sound better recorded, So I'll try and get it in mp3 soon...

remember, this is only my second try so don't be too harsh :)

The melody is pretty unstable, probably due to your weird ornaments and the harmony. You need to work on your harmony, it's really weak with your melody. Also, take out the trills, it's in the way of your melody. The piece is also too short for a sonata. Maybe you should work on your music theory and understanding different musical principles as a next step.

Next time, you should post all your compositions in ONE thread, our mods said so.