umm i just wanted people's opinion on if this melody is good or bad ....
its not even done but i just wanted people's opinion before I go any farther...:P

not that good though

thanks everyone :sweat::sweat::sweat:@_@

the song...:P

Word of advice: next time edit your post to put the song in it instead of posting again.

I think the melody is really pretty boring. You should come up with a melody counter-melody above what you have.

Word of advice: next time edit your post to put the song in it instead of posting again.

I think the melody is really pretty boring. You should come up with a melody counter-melody above what you have.

That and it lacks a strong harmony.

i like the song, just dont like the repetitive notes

Adding to Deathraider and Porsche, the cadences are weak, especially the end. Try expanding your phrasing, it'd help.

thanks for the tips....
but..
I have a hard time trying to use everyone's tip...
and applying it to it

n e wayz thanks...:sweat:

hey everyone thanks last time when I needed your opinions on the song.
Now i made some improvements but i know i still need alot of work..
i tried taking the opinions into consideration but still :P

zanywaysz
one more time can you give me your opinions?
anything will help
THNKZ