So after finding no available sheet music for Guilty Gear, I decided to start trying to transcribe music. I started out with this and aside from the obvious mismatch of hands with the notes, I would like to know what other people think of my first work. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to upload the mp3 of the song I based my transcription off of.
Much thanks to any advice or input.

Bump.
Anybody have any input at all?

You should revert back to the bass line when necessary
Use more dotted notes
Get rid of those huge impossible 3-4 note chords
Use repeat when possible
change those octave'd 8th note runs into a single note 8th run