uhhh ok people im really nervous about this but this is my first ever composition so before you listen to it expectin something like noirs let me lay out the flaws 1st.....

its my 1st composition so its bound to be crap
I played it over a microphone so when i made mistakes you can hear me stop or play a note twice
lastly its not complete i wasnt able to record all of it..........

with all that said here it is

*runs and hide from everyone*

^_^ For a first try, that's pretty good. I like how the left hand suits the right hand to create whatever effect/style you were going for.

cool well i got some positive feedback..............ok people i dont mind any feedback would be nice so long as its relevant

Ah, since you weren't able to record the whole piece, I guess there's a dramatic ending we'll be waiting to hear. Anyways, from the portion you have up here, it seems pretty good but is lacking something. I feel no rise, or suggestion of a climax. Well, if you post up the rest, make sure it holds me by the collar of my shirt until the end ^.^

that's not bad... how long did it take to make that?

uhhh 2 days :heh:

not long i know but uhhhh i dont have any real explanation as to why i did it so quick........*disgrace to composition*

i was to envolved in some sheet music that im learning so i had something that i wanted to try and then i heard that so i tried to figure what would go with that an bamn there is the song i have for you there........

another trick is that the song you are listening to is actually a minute long instead of 30 seconds this is because when i recorded it my bro sped it up by 100% and it gave that kind of effect so i thought yea why not.......

pretty nice :D

how about some drums after an intro? ^_^
coz i was expecting that after you had a rest somewhere after the first phrase