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RahsenGan
January 9th, 2008, 01:20 am
well I'm not new to these forums, i just made a new username. but i decided to make some sheets for the song, which i know will take me a LONG time, but i did this simply because i needed something else to do in my free time.
now i have almost one page done and if anyone can open it, it would be nice to get some input on if its good enough or not and what i should add/change.

for the "template", im using Xald and Remizen's arr. so LOTS of credit to them!

Remizen
January 9th, 2008, 08:27 am
not bad but you can still fix it ^^
all you have to do is to fix notes properly

RahsenGan
January 10th, 2008, 04:24 am
lol i forgot to mention that this will be my first arrangement ever, so dont flame me on how messy it is XD

devilgirl2000
January 31st, 2008, 03:58 am
For your first arrangement, this is pretty good o__O Maybe add in some pedaling, eh, eh? xD Just kidding. But it does sound a bit thin; maybe add some dynamics, too xD I noticed most of the people don't put in dynamics. I like the melody, too, and the chords are done pretty nicely, but some of them sound a bit odd. :S Maybe it's just me.