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It's certainly better than your previous work, but it does sound a bit souless and dead. Also, where's the classical part of the crossover?

I don't see any crossover, it sound empty, lacking elements. The chord progression remind me to another piece I heard, but dunno where, Maybe you should try a new one with the same progression if you want and to make a good melody and add a bass which this one lack, and other stuffs.