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Ly'x
January 17th, 2008, 10:39 pm
Let see... :think:
I just compose a few songs. It really simple, but tell me what you think about it...
Thanx :)

1. Garden (http://files.openomy.com/download?fileId=159070)
2. Farm House (http://files.openomy.com/download?fileId=159072)
3. Reminiscence ~ Smile (http://files.openomy.com/download?fileId=162565)

Nyu001
January 17th, 2008, 11:50 pm
If Garden was played by you take care with your left hand, it don't leave the melody to stand out, If was not played by you then make it softer in any software you used. I don't like how the piano sounds but that is not the point here! The compositions "Garden" and "Farm house" are nice and sounds relaxing to me, I could not listen to "Reminiscence ~ Smile" it said error.

Darkened_Angel
January 26th, 2008, 03:17 am
Farm house - It sounds nice. I could picture a couple of people sitting on a porch of a farm house playing it... The orchestration kinda messed that up though. In my opinion: I think Instead of using the orchestra, do something different with the guitar, Like a different rythm. Other then that it sounded much like one of the little towns in a zelda game.

Garden - It sounded much like a little garden. A tomato garden. :)

For future compositions: you need to be more creative with your stuff. Instead of using only a couple colors in your picture, try using a more.

pianogeek04
January 26th, 2008, 07:11 pm
[QUOTE=Ly'x;391851]Let see... :think:
I just compose a few songs. It really simple, but tell me what you think about it...
Thanx :)

well it rocks that you are composing. Just keep on doing what your doing. I thought your songs were pretty good. Go for the feeling of songs that you like. So just keep at it. Try and put your sheet music on some other sites and see what happens. :sweat:

Ly'x
February 2nd, 2008, 10:50 am
Thanx everyone...
I think the links to Reminiscence is good now...