hey guys
here are some stuffs i did for my music tech class...
they arent all that great but i just wanna see wat u guys think about it?

hmm interesting pieces. Well it seems you like piano a lot ^_^. The use of two keys on the second piece was something that caught my eye and I feel that if you enhance that feeling and take it to the next level by adding some more complex elements in there then the piece can go somewhere. For now the pieces were simple and very reserved and I would like you to take some more chances my friend! Keep on composin bro.

I think you could add a lot of interest to the first one by varying the drum part more and maybe think about adding a counter melody. The second was really interesting and I think you could do some real cool things with it. The screaming kinda freaked me out the first time I heard it though....@_@ Nice work.

thanks guys ^.^
im a girl btw lol
Keshi: yea its kinda like a story ... =] thanks buddy

CloudvsTidus4Life: thanks for the suggestion! yep piano is awesome lol ...

oh oops...keep composin girl!

hahah lol thanks =]