Is there any way possible to edit the Kingdom Heart Passion Music. I found ton's of little mistakes in it. So Can I request an edit to this??

Page 1:Measure 1-13- change Bass Clef to Treble Clef
Measure 2- Delete that rest and that E, I'm pretty sure you can't hit a note you're currently holding.
Measure 3- Change the rhythm marking of the eigth nots to Dotted Eighth, Sixteenth tied to eighth, Eigth.
Measure 5: Turn the whole note into a dotted half and the whole note on the bass clef to a half note.
Measure 6: Turn the dotted quarter into an Eigth note tied to Quarter note
Measure 9:Turn the dotted half into a half delete the rest and turn the B note into a quater note.
Measure 9-13: Can we have Triplet F's a G and two quick E's?

And the whole two hands to play one thing can we split them and find out what is really important? It'll make it at least playable.

Thank you.