Well, I've decided to start posting my compositions on this website in hopes for constructive feedback from intelligent people, like most of you seem to be. I'm only 13 years old, but I know a fair amount about musical composition. Anyways this song is supposed to portray a fairly desolate planet in which lacks intelligent life. I named it terra-scova in honor of the two scientists who found. Nice little story, isn't it.

Hey, nice composition. ^-^ Is this your first? The ending sounds kind of incomplete. Perhaps hold out the last note longer? Then again thats just me. ^_^ Well, all in all, it sounds good. nice story too. Well, keep it up, and welcome to Ichigos. :lol:

No, this is not my first composition. And thanks for giving some advice-its what i really need right now.

Well, that song certainly fits that story. Good job. =D Try adding on to it if you could.

I'm glad it seems to fit the story to you. I'll try adding a little more...

You had a nice slow intro in the beginning; I'm really surprised that the composition ended the way it did. It sounds a bit incomplete, but I enjoyed listening! :D

Not too bad, although it wasn't really exciting either. You need some better build of tension in the song (which would be one advantage of expanding on it). Furthermore, you could use some form in the piece (a simple example would be a simple ABA form, which I would suggest you go from where you are). Really, you're doing really well. Probably better than I was at your age.