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Othela
September 12th, 2004, 02:41 pm
I decided to substitute the vocal part for a Piccolo instead, since it got drowned out by all the other instruments. The only thing I don't like about it is how sharp the appogiaturas came out *sigh* It's a song... yeah, I'm stating the obvious. It's for my composition assignment for this term in Music class... I'm kinda done already :sweatdrop:
Tell me what you think ^_^ I know it a bit long! (it was nine minutes at one point...)
'Thela.
Noir7
September 12th, 2004, 03:39 pm
I like the rhythm, and the melody. This song got my attention right from the beginning actually. The piccolo's volume is too low though...especially since it's the melodic instrument. I don't know about the piano though...it seems off somehow, and doesn't match well with the piccolo. The drums are a nice addition, but I would still prefer it without them. >.< Overall, this is a good song, even though it gets a bit dull and repetitive after a while.
7/10
Rovski
September 14th, 2004, 11:15 am
It will be a great song. Sounds like martha's harbour btw :P.
8/10
Purry
September 14th, 2004, 01:08 pm
Very nicely done song, but some imporvements can be made though :) It does get repetive, a good climax would be suitable for such songs, introducing some new percussion other than drums could bring out the melody much more (some harp perhaps? Strings are good too!). Purry likes such songs though, Good effort you get 7.5/10 from me :neko: keep composing more songs! :D
Archangel
September 15th, 2004, 02:36 am
wow... awesome song! hope you got a good mark on it for your music class! well, yes, it's repetitive, but sometimes repetitiveness is good to have, and of course, it's your song. so basically if you feel like having it sound this way, then it's really good. i like it the way it is right now!
Rate:8.5/10
Al
September 17th, 2004, 03:30 am
Nice song! To deal with the length and repetition, give it a strucuture and form. Use the music to tell a story, and you'll naturally fix all your problems.
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