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Rovski
September 13th, 2004, 12:49 pm
Raboski- This piece is about my friend raboski, a cute and naughty girl.

Rovski's rain- a contemporary piece.

Archangel
September 16th, 2004, 06:28 am
it's a good piece... though when it hits around 2:07, it gets a bit messy. i personally don't listen to this kind of music, but it actually sounds pretty good so far.

Rate: 7.6/10

Noir7
September 16th, 2004, 12:32 pm
I don't like the structure on this. It doesn't lead anywhere, it just keeps going with the same arpeggios all the time. X_X

Rovski
September 16th, 2004, 01:04 pm
Yar i agree, the bass lacks variations.

Al
September 17th, 2004, 03:36 am
Rain: It's nice, but you could try developing more of it, letting it expand. Raindrops can do lots of things and act in different ways.

Raboski: Classical? Yay! Sounds nice and delicate (hence the "cute" character of the girl), but the harmony sometimes is a bit "empty" to me. Was the strange non-classical section near the end supposed to be the "naughty" part?

Rovski
September 17th, 2004, 09:20 am
Bullying ppl

Vocalist69
September 19th, 2004, 12:19 am
7.6/10