hey everyone,
im working on my second composition and i dont quite know where to go after about the first two minutes.how do you think it sounds so far?
all criticism is welcome:heh:

Not bad for a second composition (sketch). It sounds more like background music to me, so wherever you do decide to continue, go with it; experiment! You may want to, however, improve that second key change (work on the voicing). Good job, though. Experiment with this.

Very good for one pf your first times out! It will be interesting to listen where you go with this. One thing, not so much about the composition, but the produced MP3. Try adding more dynamics into the piece or if they are there, exaggerate them a little more. Also, try hushing the left hand a little more.

thanks guys.yeah i gotta work on that key change a little bit >.>