After 1 month of being completely dry of melodies, this one pops into my head and I decided to build on it. It's only 4 hours old and seems quite good! Comment as you see fit

Great flow! ^^ Everything went smoothly, except for the ending in my opinion. :-\

could i wrtie the music fore you? :D

Very nice contemporary, the melody is nice. The chords are good, although sometimes it doesn't flow very well. A solid ending would be better.
Anyway, well done. :)

It's not finished yet, but as soon as it is I will post it (in all its glory) and I will post sheet music in the forum

:D :D

ummm... could i wrtie the music fore you? ....

What does this mean? I though you said youd like the sheet music?

yeah that i can write the music for u