:D Well here it is my new composition, I hope y'all like it! :D
It's called Missing You

The beginning, and up to 0:30 is great. I like that part. This song fits good with its title too, and sets a good mood throughout the song, and I don't think anyone will turn it off until the whole song has been played. You capture the listener with this piece. However, it really needs a climax of some sort; Something to get goosebumps from! It has to be that good! What I mean is, the song is good and all, but there is no extraordinary feeling in it, and no special melody. Good work on the octave jumping though. The part around 1:20 is the climax part for me. When I was listening to this song, I was waiting for something special to come, but it didn't. X_X That's too bad, but I don't think you should edit this song, but take some advice and keep composing in the future, for better songs. Want a rating?

7/10

thanks but i dunno how do edit the songXD!

I have some other songs that i wrote but I don't want to post them cause there to valuable.

awesome song! what you mean you can't write?!?!?! this is perfect! the mood of it, the sound, it is all very smooth! beautiful music. i have to say it's better than mine! you should play that for your christmas thing: it's a nice song and it's your own which will give it an extra punch to it. when ppl know you wrote it, they will definitely be impressed. i know i am! great job!

Rating: 9.5/10

:D Thanks archangel but what can I use to write the music with besides finale notepad. :D

*EdIt*

XD I don't think I will be having a christmas competition because my piano teacher who hosts it moved and she might not want to do it in the winter maybe in the spring. also its because not alot of ppl wanted to sign up to do it this time. So when I do perform it at anything I will try to make a live recording if you can tell me how, cause I'm sort of new to this music stuff. I know how to do some things tho. :heh:

Is THAT your song?

I've found this in midi info (I always open midi file by Cakewalk)

-------------

Composed, arranged and recorded live by Yuko Ohigashi (age: 13).

This composition may NOT be used in any form, or for any purpose other than for personal listening pleasure, without written permission.

e-mail: Yuko@yukopiano.com

web site: http://www.yukopiano.com/

--------------

:( :( :(

She&#39;s done it again... <_< She copied someone elses song...

Omg i did not no that that existed seriously until now.

wtf? Are you really this dumb, or are you just pretending? X_X You&#39;re seriously blaming it on that you made a song that&#39;s already been composed, and you didn&#39;t know about it? After this, I hope all the composers here will agree with me, and no let you have their sheets

;_;

Hehe, I&#39;m glad mine are too crappy to be worth nicking :P

I suggest reporting this post? It&#39;s not nice having plagiarisers on a forum where original compositions (often of publishing standard) are posted on a regular basis...

(I&#39;ve reported it)

yeah, i compared it with both. kurumi took about half way in the song of the original song.

Kurumiangel, why? do you enjoy taking music from other ppl? what will come out of that?

I don&#39;t know what to say at the moment. you ask everyone&#39;s music sheet, you take my song and get a music sheet from it without permission, without any sense of respect. no one can trust you anymore. i wish you never did what you did, but that was a choice. every choice you make has a consequence.

i&#39;ll leave this to the moderators for what they should do about this. I hope in the future you don&#39;t do this again. you won&#39;t get very far in life...

transposition -.-

People, don&#39;t be deceived by the innocent-looking avatar. Kurumi is a guy, not a girl . . .

Kurumi, if you&#39;re going to steal music from other people and claim it as your own, why make it so obvious? I mean, why take huge chunks from other songs? People will notice, so if you&#39;re going to cheat, at least do it right. But it seems like you can&#39;t even do that.

Guys, I believe some serious action has to be taken against him . . . isn&#39;t this considered to be a criminal offense?

hmmm im actually startin to wonder about the art contest you know :think:

Well i enjoyed workin hard on my pictures but i dont know i feel like the whole art contest is a sham now............which kinda makes me feel bad about my pics for sum reason :(