Ok well this is one of my very weird compositions:unsure:...the first half took me 15 min and the other 10 min...i wasnt really thinking of an emotion or a style so its REALLY random:heh:..not my best probably the worst but i havent written my other compositions yet...by the way i only play the flute and piano.. i dont play the violin or clarinet so its really not THAT great but please just comment on it thx!!!::) and the title is in french because im from quebec and it was for my friend so i just made a funny title...:heh: Note: Please do not use the compositions without contacting me!!!

It's really repetitive. :heh: Plus, it seems like every instrument is playing the melody. You should probably give 1 instrument the melody, and give the other 2 harmony. :P

thanx for the advice!! i did this when i was 13 (okay not a big difference because now im 14) BUT i personally think i kind of improve i will try to write my other compostions and upload them! thanx again for the advice!!!

No problem. :D It could also be more musical, like using the right chord patterns/cadences and the stuff I mentioned above. This site might be a good read if you need help on theory:

http://www.musictheory.net

well here is my other composition...still not the best and i dont play the trumpet or clarinet...the best composition i have is for piano but i didnt write it down cause is kind of long:heh: and maybe im a litlle lazy:heh: but anyways here it is!! Note:Contact me if you want to use the compos..Please comment!!

Same thing as before...they aren't really musical, plus it's still repetitive. I really recommend reading some of the things on that site I posted earlier so you can see what I'm talking about...:\

okay

Yeah... let's go through this one...

OK looking at your left hand in the piano. That is very dull in more than one way. One, you repeat that exact measure through the entire song. Two, all the intervals of the two notes are fifths. Fifths are very open in sounding making them sound dull. They are used in the lower register because triads in a lower register sound like much so usually chords are broken in the left hand.

Looking at page four, WTF's up with the flutes man? One, you have both parts playing the same thing. Two you have them playing two notes at once without marking any kind of divisi. Three you have them playing at forte-fortisimo, which is just like... WAY to loud as you have the piano playing soft. From the looks of it, you though you could get away with some copy-pasta of the same measure for a while and call it a day. And the copy-pasta continues...

Then we hit page six where the trumpets come in. You really need to read something like wikipedia about the range of trumpets. Sure trumpets can play that high, but that is SO not their comfortable range. That needs to come an octave down. And again you did copy-pasta just to make the composition longer.

And on page nine. That ending was so very... random. it really wasn't even an ending. it was like "yeah let's just do this and throw a fermata on the end." A cadence or something would have been nice.

Also orchestration was pretty poor. All you did was double the same part on the second part. If you're going to do that in this case, then you don't really need a second part at all. If your going to use second parts and such, you need to harmonize your melodies or bring something new to the table.

All in all this was a pretty poor composition. You're missing the most important piece to it all. A piece of music is always expressive. From the looks of this, it looks like you went to town with Finale Notepad and didn't have any sense of direction for what you were doing. I think your first step should be to learn. Grab a book on music theory and learn it all. There is much for you to learn from it yet. Also take a listen to whatever music you listen to and try to think of what makes it sound great. With more knowledge and a better understanding of what it means to compose, give it another shot. :thumb:

I sound fortunate for not having Finale to view this.

thx for the tips but about the all the dynamic problems its because it was the only way i was able to hear because it kept on bugging...i know flutes cant do that