hi guys mmm this is mi first composition....:unsure:
I have not professional knowledge about music but i can play the guitar....
i hope you like it and please coment.....

mm esta es mi primera composicion...no tengo estudios profesionales de musica pero se como tocar la guitarra(es el unico instrumento q se tocar XD)
espero q les guste. acepto criticas constructivas...^_^

Try to look for chords more attractive and a melody more memorable. The piece hardly hold my attention and it feels just dead of energy and emotion. But for to be your first composition is actually good in that aspect. And Welcome to Ichigos, hope you stick around here! :)

ty nyu001
ok i will follow your advice.

Yeah, I agree with Nyu001 on this one. Needs more flava' flave. XD

I also know how hard it can be to mimic a guitarist when using samples as I'm also working on a guitar composition. You're a guitarist though, right? Why not record it yourself?