Just i song i composed and wanted to see if its any good what i can do to improve it.

The quality sucks here but its the best i can do right now..... :(

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZBsEePqKYo

Sheets can be downloaded here>>>>>>>> http://uploading.com/files/cmd95ff2/Estefania%2527s%2BLullaby.pdf/ <<<<<<<<<<<

I have only been playing for 1 year so you might think i suck :P