ok here's a much improved composition since my 1st. Feedback would be much apreciated. There's alot of static which i apologise for

Just when I thought you've ruined the song by making it waaay too slow in the intro, you introduce a gentle and good melody and accomp. Good job on that. I can imagine hearing this song be played in a night scene in either a game or an anime, or so. Do you have the MIDI for it? It lives up for the standard where I actually want to encode it into an MP3 - despite my laziness.

Anyhow, good job on this Sephiroth. Especially for being your first composition.

7/10

YAY thumbs up from noir ^_^

nah i havent got the midi for this............i done this by recording it via digicam while i sat down and played it off my keyboard. Once i've got some free time i'll convert it though ^_^

Wait, isn't this is your second composition? It's really nice . . definitely the soft touch you intended, enhanced by the tonal quality of the keyboard sound and your good performance. I enjoyed the fact that you took your time, not rushing anything, and just letting it flow.

yea this is my 2nd composition.............if you read my post at the start it said a much improved composition "since" my 1st...............basically my other 1 i feel was a load of crap. but when i get the time i'll create this in midi format then noir can change it to mp3 ^_^