By listen and think I meant please think of ways it could be better and/or continued. I believe the chord progression for the first 8 measures is Em, D, C ,D, each taking one beat. If you want the complete statistics of it, just say. I REALLY NEED HELP!!!!!

Just realizing this, but the last two measures do not have melody................ so don't really bother listening. I'm really new at this, so I don't know what to ask or who to see, so that info would be useful.

Well, it appears to me that it's not hard for you to come up with different melodies and rhythms and etc. So I liked the innovations you came up with in each new cycle/repetition.

However, you can only go so far with a short chord progression like that. You'll have to find a way to expand on that chord progression while maintaining at the same time the integrity of the idea behind that progression.

Good luck!

In response (well, thanks, first of all...), The chord progression only goes for the first (8, i think) measures, and for the other (now its 8) measures, the chord progression by the tuba is the same, but for the flute it's melody (following no certain progression), and trumpet just has different minor keys. (And actually, I was just feeling lazy, so I cliked a bunch of random notes and the ones that sounded good, I saved).

FINALLY IT IS FINISHED!!!!!!! (Ive never been so excited as with this one [hateful little bugger])!!! I spent like four hours on the last measure... whew. It feels so good to have it off my back. Please, critique it if you will. I don't care if it's bad! I'm just glad its done.

What does word medival mean? Or did you actually mean medieval?

ich... must've been a spelling error in the file name. oops.

Sup man, this be taylor Fong yo! I made an account and so yea. I need help! How do i download my comps on here?

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