Hey everybody!!! This is a song that my dad asked me to arrange for him... it's not nearly finished... I mean, the bass is all fuzzy and the harmonies definately need some work... but let me know what you think!!! OK, I'm done! Bye!!!

Ok, I'm listen to it now and, I don't like it. The melody is high almost, and then the tuba, or what ever is playing in the front, is so low, trying to play high, then when the wood wind, or what ever came in, was even higher, and put down the tuba or w/e.
Then the wood wind played low, horrible!, and now the melody and solo of the brass instrument was not bad but could use some work and doesn't fit in very well.
Now it starting a basic measure, sounding good if the piano in the back was playing lower (I suggest lower an octive or two on the piano) then in the end, all three insturments playing at once, sounded like my school marching band (Horrible), all clashing together. Then in the end it mellowed out, and ended good with the beg. melody.

Rate: 3/10

Sorry about all the negetive feed back, but it whats I feel :)

8/10. Good job. Has nice smooth, relaxing flow, although tuba volume could go down a lil, try replacing with french horn ^_^ :P :D

I'm confused . . your dad wrote this piece, and you arranged it, right? Cause the title of the piece reminds me of a nursery rhyme o.0 but I don't remember how that goes, so I can't compare . .

Anyways, it was very nice and peaceful . . somebody come up with lyrics! =)

You got a good peaceful emotion there, but the song has to be more interesting.. Like ^ said, come up with lyrics! That will add it up even more. Um, I don't know what to say, I didn't like it that much. It has got a good atmosphere, but that's unfortunately it. X_X

6/10

I do have lyrics... and it's King Coal, rather than King Cole ^^ Thanks all of you for your comments! I'm working on it!

I like it ^_^ . It's very calm and peaceful. :lol:

COMPLIMENTS TO YOUR FATHER

That is really good. :D