Excuse the pun title lol

Adding new tracks in new posts in this thread, so for latest compositions look at the latest posts.


Time frame for the composition is 3 days, took probably about 30 hours.

Please, download it in the link below because Ichigo's max file size for mp3's doesnt allow to upload this song in the attachments. Thank you. ^_^

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=6TP64JVE

I absolutely love this. I can't bring myself to critique you because your skill level is far beyond my own. Chills ran down my spine as I listened to this. I'm not trying to boost your ego or anything, but I thought I would just be honest and say that this is a very touching piece. I admire this, and your ability to compose. I hope that someone here can give you the proper input that you deserve, but I'm going to be that one guy who has nothing bad to say.

Assuming this is really your work and you didn't steal it from mozart's unifinished compositions diary. o.0

Kidding, of course.

All in all, good work! I'm sure some of the more talented and seasoned composers here will be glad to give you more than I have.

Heya,

I remember you was around here years ago. Welcome back! :)

I see you spent a good time dedicated to this piece. But those chords are killing the originality of the piece. You should have gone beyond those chords that has a particular character that is very easily noticeable in the media.

0:12-0:13 - There is a big gasp between the first 2 notes and the third of the piano. This sounds disconnected. Looks to me like you accidentally put them an octave lower, lol. The ending was too abrupt. And looks like you included a brass that never appeared through the whole piece. o_O That ending could be perfect to come with something new and exiting.

thank you very much Elezeid and Nyu001

lol im surprised you remember me i was on here for like a hot second O_O

yea i do see about the ending is a bit rushed. seems to happen a lot when i get the urge to round up the track. need to spend more time on that >_<!

thanks again for commenting guys :D!

any other inputs on the original track is welcome.

Otherwise here is another, more generic composition fo ryou guys to enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbGiNrKo0VE