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V_for_Vital
July 13th, 2010, 12:00 pm
Hey guys n girls ^_^ i thought to edit my previous thread to have a more appropriate title for this section but the title doesnt change so I'll use this thread [with a more appropriate title] to post my works in.

So i'll go to my latest WIP, "The Tragedy of a Black Swan". The idea behind it is to create something dark but not ugly, something that can be compelling yet feel depressing.

So far the criticizm of the tune has been that the samples used dont sound natural. I would like to know more as to what people think about the compositon itself.

Thnx in advance ^_^

Etaroko
July 13th, 2010, 12:24 pm
I really enjoyed that!

The only thing I didn't like, and this is just an opinion that I'm sure no one else will agree with, was how long you held on to the dissonance at the beginning of the piece. But like I said thats just my own personal preference.

V_for_Vital
July 13th, 2010, 06:20 pm
Thanks :D, yea the first minute im getting more and more tiered of but thing is the composition is so empty up untill it finishes im not too sure how to fill that space adequately.

V_for_Vital
July 16th, 2010, 09:54 am
Okay if the wip is not quite interesting here is something else lol.

A finished fan made track for Inception. [which i saw at a midnight screening and thought it was AMAZING!]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LwYU_0Qfzc