Hi guys. This is my first post here lol. I just wanted to share this pretty simple piece I made some months ago and see if I could get some opinions, I don't know :P

Here it is. (http://www.4shared.com/audio/kN9iMslK/fleet_street.html)

Anykind of constructive criticism will be aprecciated (:

I liked it once it got to the harp part. Before that it was kind of repetitive. Keep it up!

Same as Alfonso, though I do understand that 'buildup' feel ya may have wanted at ta beginning; however, generally, that's used for longer pieces... :P

Gonna expand on this?

cool. i like it. though.. i think, and this is my personal opinion, it would be better to have that guitar strum just play it once after the piano part diminishes, and just continue with something else. do you know which part i'm talking about?

@Alfonso: Thanks! I know it kinda gets boring in the beginning, I'll work on that, thank you (:

@Mushyrulez: Yep, I'm planning on make a full song with it. I know the buildup part is kind of short, I'll try to fix that ):

@Ander: Thank u (:. By the "guitar" part do you mean the harp? if you do, then I get it, it certainly gets repetitive, I'll add some more stuff

is it a harp? it's right after you get rid of the piano. and that BRIING~~~ and another BRIING~~~. i'm just saying you should get rid of all the BRIING~~~ but the first one.

ps. i like your avatar.

is it a harp? it's right after you get rid of the piano. and that BRIING~~~ and another BRIING~~~. i'm just saying you should get rid of all the BRIING~~~ but the first one.

ps. i like your avatar.

Em, the bell-like sounds? O: sorry I don't really understand ): Maybe you could tell me the second it begins?

Ps. Oh, thanks lol.

So sorry for the doublepost! ):