Done in 3 Days

shadow is a little weird but i think it's ok . ne ?

Photoshop CS 2 + One plain mouse (I want a "Pen mouse" T_T)

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x307/whitebearshine/Touhou-Udonge.png

wow...thats really good!!!! :D

The perspective seems a bit off between her left and right side; especially with her right thigh and calf. Also, it looks like Reisen broke her back with the way how the hips-back-bust is angled. The back should be panned more towards the audience to provide additional volume and to properly proportion it to her hips. In addition, Reisen is one of the few touhou characters to have a bust. Careful when pettanko-ing something. Her left ear is a bit too far back on her head (and both could have been blended a bit more into the hair).

I personally don't mind the shading and shadows. It gives the work a bit more of your personal style without detracting from the "standard" Reisen.



I also saw Hinagiku wearing Usamimi before I saw Reisen in this picture. Something about the face just feels out of place.

The colours and line work are nice! The pose is interesting but I am still trying to get use to that angle. Legs kind of look weird and the left hand's thumb looks big to me. But nice artwork. :>

you did a great job with the eyes... since i'm an anime lover as well, so i like eyes. lol. the body can use more work as mentioned earlier by others. she does have a very sharp angle on her back.

OMG. That's really good! You do well on the computer! I can't draw on the computer well at all... But... That's an amazin' drawing you have there! :O :O :O

Does anyone think the mouth is a little off?

I don't think so. I think that's how the style it's drawn.

Ah, then my bad, my bad.

Reisen's just a useless little bunny, only good for her *shot*


Pretty good, I should say; some minor errors in proportion, I suppose (though I couldn't tell any of those out at first or second glance :/), but nice and simple style. :D

...You did that all with a mouse? o_o;;

I'm with everything M, Nyu001 and Ander said for the critique, but other than that, yeah, it's pretty good. Any drawings I make on my computer always has a rough kind of look and feel, and I have a pen tablet >.<.

Alright, a good picture!

About the back "problems" M pointed out...it's a little tough to judge here, because of the skirt, which looks like it's getting blown back by the wind. I'd agree that the anatomy isn't perfect, but it's better than most of the stuff I see, and I definitely wouldn't call it "broken." It looks like a stylistic choice more than anything, and it's one that I agree with, though it wasn't pulled off perfectly. About "turning her back to accentuate the fine shapliness of the tangent of the hips/blahblahblah," her back is turned about as far as humanly possible already while still showing her face at that angle. I think the angle of the back is fine as is. We don't need to see the volume of her back, because we all KNOW her back has volume already. Drawn correctly, profile views are just fine. The perspective also looks pretty good to me, especially considering the advanced angle the artist has chosen. The legs and feet look pretty interesting. Again, it's not perfect, but it's a pose even pros would mess up once and awhile.

Anyway, did you draw this, Whitebear, or just color it? If you drew it, your drawing skills are far ahead of your coloring skills. I'd suggest painting a bunch to whip yourself into shape. It'd help your drawing too if you took my advice.