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malifor
September 24th, 2010, 05:43 am
Here are three compositions that i have recently made, as the beginnings of a soundtrack for an RPG. Sound quality might not be that great.
Please give your opinion.

Alfonso de Sabio
September 25th, 2010, 03:46 am
I think the most impressive thing about these is your ability to slide between a classical sound and a video game sound. I feel like you could really beef these up, though. I don't think any of these have more than two voices, and honestly, the themes aren't that catchy. Keep working on it! It'll come.

Mushyrulez
September 26th, 2010, 04:26 am
I know your name, Arthur Chen, and I can stalk you now. >:)

Did you record these? :V

The classical one sounds more Bach-esque Baroque than classical with that fugue-like texture; I, for one, would /definitely/ not put it inside an RPG. Unless it's one of those old RPGs and you'll use it for a 'town' theme...

The sad theme sounds nice, except if you have broken chords, you might want to play them the whole time, without pauses? I'm not really sure. You're planning to loop these, right?

The title theme... maybe add more things? It sounds more melancholy than title-ish; it seems to me than many RPG title themes are all big and grand, to catch the eye (ear) of the player, y'know?

Oh well. Good luck with your soundtrack~ (you're gonna post more, right?)

malifor
September 26th, 2010, 06:17 pm
Thank you for your comments, they have been taken into consideration for future compositions, but for now here is another sad theme. And the album art.

Why would you want to stalk me?

These are recorded and there is still more to come.

These songs loop pretty well in my opinion.

The title theme might be changed into sad theme 3 and a new title theme be made to replace it.

I still need to refine the current songs a bit, and again, the sound quality of the recordings might not be good.

Ander
September 27th, 2010, 12:16 am
who's helping you execute these recordings? or yet a better question. who is giving you this chance to record your songs?

edit: too be quite frankly.... the beginning caught my attention, but as it drags on... i had this impression that everyone was still tuning their instruments before playing the actual piece. :heh:

Mushyrulez
September 27th, 2010, 03:02 am
Yeah, I think it'd be better if ya made an electronic file instead of a recording :V (if you're gonna use this for a video-game thing, you'll need a much better orchestra).

Doesn't sound very sad at all... Why would you need that many sad themes, anyways? :<

Ander
September 29th, 2010, 12:13 am
Why would you need that many sad themes, anyways? :<

hahaha. i thought that was pretty funny.:lol: