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maleficent
January 9th, 2011, 07:27 am
Hi,Im a new member here name Haru!,nice 2 meet ya all ^^ I want to post my drawing to let everyone comment a little bit
Thank you 4 viewing~Enjoy
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/1310/cou4.jpg
Nyu001
January 9th, 2011, 02:35 pm
Nice! Only thing, the guy's ear is a bit too high and his fingers' top parts are too long. Unless I am interpreting it wrong. Looks like the first part of the finger is behind her hair, then the second and top part are the ones showing. The girl's hairline should be more curved to the right side (Left side from their perspective) since her head is looking at the left side (Right side from their perspective).
Anyway, well done! :)
Ander
January 10th, 2011, 12:20 am
I agree with Nyu001. The hand makes the girl's head look like it's flat as a piece of paper. It doesn't look like her head is round. It looks like he's holding a notebook rather than her round head. I like the face of the left one. I'm guessing you started with him first. Did you draw this with a pencil first btw?
mangaluva
January 10th, 2011, 01:52 am
oooh, I really like this picture. So cute and sweet ^-^
I somewhat agree with Ander, if you just drew the position of the guy's hand a bit higher, it would look completely natural.
It's pretty rare to see someone (finally) make a guy with medium hair look like a guy. Most of the time, people make guys look like girls :\ Good job! Like I said, I really like this pic.
Hayuki
February 18th, 2011, 09:41 pm
Cute! ^_^ Love the guy's hair overall and the girl's fringe. This pic makes me wanna smile :)
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