Hello everyone!
I've decided to finally make a thread for myself...

I use
-audacity
-sonar 8.5 producer
-sibelius 6
-Fantom G8
-Nordiska piano
-I have microphones to put lyrics in songs but the moment I am not interested in using my own voice... D:

Note: I record while playing live for the song to have more emotion.

You are very well armed, lol.

Hope to hear something from you soon~

started this on sibelius ^_^

http://www.4shared.com/audio/GhCEbbaj/pop_song_piano_beginning.html

Is that it? That was like... 5 seconds long.

You should consider to add a bass to go along with the bass drum. These instruments together makes rich the low range, creating a filled spectrum. In your fragment the low range sounded weak.

Here's a full piece. :)

I can't really say anything but nice. I thought it was kinda random at the end, but I think you have a sense of knowing how to resolve things. It reminded me of a ballet music. I could just picture dancers running on their toes with their heads jerked back and their nose up high. I think little more dynamic changes would be nice. I think that will bring out the more emotion out of the piece.

Here is something done with with the piano sound from Nexus2 (a VST).
As always, this was played live.
Enjoy!