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Hayuki
February 18th, 2011, 10:03 am
Hi all! As you can see, my title states that I'm an FMA freak. Well, to live up to that title, I'm here to prove it to be the ultimate truth :P These two sketches were drawn while I was watching FMA - Original and FMA - Brotherhood. I loved both series, and of course my favourite character is Edward Elric ^_^ I was so obsessed that I couldn't help myself and started drawing again, after not touching a pencil for a couple of years. I got a bit too busy recently and haven't drawn in a while since that second drawing. But I'm thinking I should draw someone from Pandora Hearts, since this is my new obsession :P So, watch this space!

Each of these sketches is a combined copy of two screenshots from FMA. Sorry for the quality, my scanner is not too good... But ah well, you can still see it :) Hope you like the sketches ^_^

Ander
February 18th, 2011, 06:54 pm
Oo... you got a pretty soft touch. I like that. There's no doubt that these are FMA characters. Winry?... I forgot her name... I only watched the original and that was a long time ago, looks a little different. I think it's her face. Eyes, mouth and nose looks good but it's her jaw. It's too low or too stretched down. I like the pencil work though. It add more flavor to your drawings.

Hayuki
February 18th, 2011, 09:04 pm
Oo... you got a pretty soft touch. I like that. There's no doubt that these are FMA characters. Winry?... I forgot her name... I only watched the original and that was a long time ago, looks a little different. I think it's her face. Eyes, mouth and nose looks good but it's her jaw. It's too low or too stretched down. I like the pencil work though. It add more flavor to your drawings.
Domo arigato! ^_^ Winry, yes, that's indeed her name. For some reason it was more difficult to draw her than Ed. I really don't know why, it's weird. I actually tried to draw just her, from some other scene, and it was a fail <_< I guess I should stick to guys! Hehe.

mangaluva
February 19th, 2011, 04:36 pm
Oh em gee! Your great! I love how you shade everything. I like FMA too ^^

Hope I get to see more.

Hayuki
February 19th, 2011, 04:41 pm
Thank you! :D Yay, a fellow FMA lover!

I'm trying to think of a scene from Pandora Hearts to start drawing... So hopefully I'll see some more of my pencils soon, too ^_^

Hayuki
March 17th, 2011, 11:12 pm
So, here is some more from me. I finally decided whom from Pandora Hearts to focus on ;)

Nyu001
March 17th, 2011, 11:15 pm
Looks nice! :woohoo: Mouth should be a bit more to the right though.

Hayuki
March 17th, 2011, 11:23 pm
Thank you! Hmm, I actually thought it wasn't far enough to the left ... Oh well. I'll try drawing him in some other pose next time, we'll see what comes out of it :)

Ander
March 18th, 2011, 01:50 am
Nice job. That actually looks pretty good. Don't really have anymore to add than that

Solaphar
March 18th, 2011, 03:48 am
Looks great! Break is actually my second favorite character from PH.


Try to guess my first. =P


Can't really think of anything to critique. Hmm, well, I guess the ear shadow seems a little bit off.

Have any plans to draw Lotti or Gil?

Hayuki
March 18th, 2011, 08:21 am
Nice job. That actually looks pretty good. Don't really have anymore to add than that
Hehe, thanks a lot hey! :)


Looks great! Break is actually my second favorite character from PH.


Try to guess my first. =P
Arigato ^_^ And that's just too easy to guess :P



Can't really think of anything to critique. Hmm, well, I guess the ear shadow seems a little bit off.

Have any plans to draw Lotti or Gil?
I was actually planning on drawing Gil. 'Cause he's... he's... awesome :wub: I shall be back with more! B)

Hayuki
November 22nd, 2011, 01:20 pm
Hmm, and after like a year of silence, here I am again ^_^ With more arts, of course :3 What do you guys think of it? Any critiques?

In order of appearance: the main couple from the shoujo manga Strobe Edge; Lucy from Elfen Lied in her Nyuu form; a random scene I thought up; and a random anime girl. Mind you, the last three were drawn completely without references ^^

Ander
November 22nd, 2011, 07:57 pm
Cool... look great. I would have to say that the hand on the girl in the last picture is a bit too small....

Actually they very small.. and her arm is a bit too short. It's either that... or her face too big.

The male character in the first one looks great. I especially like his collar. It's so big! just like his eyes! What I especially like about is how much time you've put into his hair. Just like the girl's hair in the sepia picture.

For the third one.... compositionally I would have to argue that it should be bigger. Well... let me rephrase it. The back ground should be bigger.... so I guess you could say that the paper should have been bigger. ^^

animefans12
November 23rd, 2011, 02:57 am
Dude. You drew these without references? That's just EPIC and PLAIN AWESOME right there. *o* Awesome work and I'm looking forward to seeing more of them. :D

RD
November 23rd, 2011, 06:32 am
you're sense of lighting is crazy good!

Nyu001
November 23rd, 2011, 04:23 pm
The third one is my favorite! Its main problem is the scale! That boy is way too big for the scene. If he stand up he will be taller than the tree, lol.

iMCH~
November 23rd, 2011, 08:43 pm
I love the Lucy sketch! Totally jealous on your skills. :D

Hayuki
November 24th, 2011, 01:04 pm
Cool... look great. I would have to say that the hand on the girl in the last picture is a bit too small....

Actually they very small.. and her arm is a bit too short. It's either that... or her face too big.

The male character in the first one looks great. I especially like his collar. It's so big! just like his eyes! What I especially like about is how much time you've put into his hair. Just like the girl's hair in the sepia picture.

For the third one.... compositionally I would have to argue that it should be bigger. Well... let me rephrase it. The back ground should be bigger.... so I guess you could say that the paper should have been bigger. ^^

Thanks for the compliments and the critiques! Yeah, that last girl's hands are kinda crappy, totally agree x_x

Hehe, yeah, I had to summon up some courage when I started out on his hair :D The fact that I had B, 2B, and 4B pencils available helped A LOT.

The third one - yeah, the paper was an A5, so I didn't have much space to go all out on the background ^^


Dude. You drew these without references? That's just EPIC and PLAIN AWESOME right there. *o* Awesome work and I'm looking forward to seeing more of them. :D

Well, only the last three ^^ Thank you very much! ^_^ I do have more... I guess I'll upload them, too ;)


you're sense of lighting is crazy good!

Thanks a lot! Glad you think so ^^


The third one is my favorite! Its main problem is the scale! That boy is way too big for the scene. If he stand up he will be taller than the tree, lol.

Hmm... Well, I kinda pictured it that the boy is somewhere else completely from the place with the girl and the tree. So you could say he's "in the front" while the girl's at the back... But yeah, I'm not sure, lol :P


I love the Lucy sketch! Totally jealous on your skills. :D

Aww thanks, glad you like her ^_^ Lol, don't be, I'm not as good as I want to be, just yet :P

Liv-kat
November 24th, 2011, 06:01 pm
4 words: you have serious talent. That's all that needs to be said but I'll add more. I really like how you do more than one drawing style, the FMA,Lucy,pandora hearts, the originals, they all look different. The detail is wonderful. I really admire how well you did these. I might put some of mine on the forums later, but they are nothing compared to yours. I look forward to seeing some more of yours, so please, PuT MoRe!!!! :D
YoU RoCk!!!!!!!

Hayuki
November 25th, 2011, 12:30 pm
4 words: you have serious talent. That's all that needs to be said but I'll add more. I really like how you do more than one drawing style, the FMA,Lucy,pandora hearts, the originals, they all look different. The detail is wonderful. I really admire how well you did these. I might put some of mine on the forums later, but they are nothing compared to yours. I look forward to seeing some more of yours, so please, PuT MoRe!!!! :D
YoU RoCk!!!!!!!
Awww! That's so sweet of you to say! ^_^ And I'm very glad you like the diversity in the style I use :D I was kinda sad that I don't have a certain style which I'd apply to all my art... But I guess being able to draw in different styles can also be a good thing ;) I promise I'll upload more stuff ^^

iMCH~
November 26th, 2011, 01:02 pm
I promise I'll upload more stuff ^^

Like, right now? :D

Hayuki
November 26th, 2011, 09:02 pm
Like, right now? :D
Yup, right now! Check below ;)

The girl's arms on the last pic are way too short... or her head too big >.< This was one of the older sketches, I guess I wasn't as good at anatomy then. The second last pic is an illustration to "Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell", a novel by Susanna Clarke. A VERY recommended read, btw!

How do you like these?

HopelessComposer
November 27th, 2011, 06:00 am
The first one of Ed is good. So is the second. The two girls are okay. The guy in the fancy British looking outfit is off-balance. He'd fall over in that pose in real life, because his center of balance isn't above his foot. Gotta watch out for that, lol. =)

Hayuki
December 1st, 2011, 09:41 pm
The first one of Ed is good. So is the second. The two girls are okay. The guy in the fancy British looking outfit is off-balance. He'd fall over in that pose in real life, because his center of balance isn't above his foot. Gotta watch out for that, lol. =)

Hehe, thanks for the critique ^^ Yeah, that pose was quite difficult to get right...:unsure:

And here's some more stuff! Drew the one with the guy today, and the one with the girl was finished today after lying in my desk for a week or so :D The guy's hand is too small... AGAIN <_<

hirohito345
December 2nd, 2011, 05:45 pm
my hellsing sketch 14443

Hayuki
December 2nd, 2011, 06:47 pm
Ooh, looks so evil :shifty:

hirohito345
December 6th, 2011, 02:32 pm
I only like hellsing beacuse its about protestans and catholics im from ireland so ....

Hayuki
January 5th, 2012, 06:51 pm
Some more stuff from me. Enjoy :)