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Sumigirl
March 20th, 2011, 05:13 am
Ok, so I've given it much thought and have decided to write a bleach fan story. I'm still writing some of it but i'll still post what I've got so far. It takes place after Ichigo's battle with Grimmjow...I hope you guys enjoy it!! Tell me what you think, and please tell me your suggestions..BTW: If you ever use this please credit me:Sumer Cave^^ I really hope you all looooooooooove it XD

Sumigirl
March 20th, 2011, 06:00 am
After defeating Grimmjow, Ichigo fell to his knees sputtering blood, his sweat-covered chest heaving heavily. Orihime rushed over to his side. Tears welled up in her eyes. Nel slowly approached.

"Ichigo! Wake up please!" Orihime pleaded. Ichigo stared into Orihime's eyes. How long had it been since she had looked at him like that? He was always getting into trouble. It feels nice, Ichigo thought.
"Orihime...don't cr-y..., please. I'll be fine." Orihime wiped her spilling tears and then got a determined look upon her face. Ichigo thought that was her cutest face. "Alright.Hmph. C'mon Nel, we need to get Ichigo somewhere safe! Let's GO!" Nel nodded and got up. Orihime put Ichigo's bloodstained arm around her neck as she helped him up. He grunted in agony.

Soon after, the group set off into the perpetual desert of Wako Mundo. For hours they walked(Ichigo limped) through the sand passing nothing but dunes. Soon after the sun began to set a dilapidated building came into view. "Look, Ichigo! It won't be much longer. I promise!" Orihime said hopefully. Ichigo half-conciously nodded with raspy breath. About twenty minutes later they arrived in a white stone structure. Nel set out to pic wood for a fire. Orihime set to healing Ichigo. She stripped Ichigo's shirt which exposed bloody scratches and cuts. Ichigo winced while Orihime bandaged him. Not but after a few minutes, Ichigo passed out. Two days later, Ichigo awoke from his dream state. He had a hazy revorie about his dream. Someone was trying to warn him. But about what? He shook off the dream and looked around. Nel was curled in a corner, Orihime bent over a fire. He walked over to her and put his hand on her shoulder. She looked up at him and gazed into his eyes for several seconds. Then as Ichigo sat down beside her, Orihime once again burst into tears.

"Ichi..gowww!" She suddenly embraced him and began to sob. "I was so scared! I thought I might lose you!" Ichigo looked down into her eyes. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to worry you so much..," he said. Orihime just blushed and started to hiccup. Only minutes after she fell asleep in Ichigo's arms. Nel awoke gazing at the scene. She silently slipped out into the night with her heart full of an unusual heaviness. Ichigo put his head up against one of the stone walls and fell asleep and woke an hour later by Orihime's soft voice. "Ichigo...,". Ichigo looked down and saw that she was still asleep. He smiled and put his head back up against the wall. But Orihime began to mumble again. "Ichigo...I..love..y..ou..," and then fell silent again.
Ichigo's head began to spin. How could he not have known? He felt somewhat filled with joy to hear this. He blushed and suddenly became over-whelemed with his emotions. He put his hand under the nape of her neck and raised her face to his. He then breathed in her scent(she smell like strawberries) savouring it. He gazed at her serene face and then kissed her soft lips passionately. Orihime's eyes fluttered as he did this, and once she realized what was happening, put her arms around his neck and softly kissed him back. Her face was flushed when he let her go. Both of their hearts beat wildly. Orihime looked at the ground and then into his face. No words were spoken. Orihime just went back into Ichigo's arms and fell asleep, both of them content for the time being.

And that is part one of the fan fiction I'm creating! Hope you all like, no looooooove it^^ I worked really hard on it...Please stay tuned for part two! BTW: The name of this is After the Battle: Part one-Midnight's Confession.

Ander
March 22nd, 2011, 01:51 am
cool... I think the climax, though it was brief, was worth the reading of all those words and sentences before that. I was wondering where you were going with it... and I think it was a good set up. Good work!

KaitouKudou
March 22nd, 2011, 03:38 am
Wow, this post made me want to post some of my old fanfictions that I wrote...actually why not haha, but I will make my own thread for it so I don't butt into yours lol. Good job by the way, just felt too short. more like a scene then a story so I hope to see a bit more on part 2.^.^

Mr.Waffles
March 23rd, 2011, 09:56 pm
its a good fic wish there were more like it =)

Nyu001
March 23rd, 2011, 10:25 pm
Hehe, cool! Nice to see some writings around here.

By the way could have been good to use space in your text for an easier reading. xD

Sumigirl
April 3rd, 2011, 01:44 am
Thank you all for your kindness^^ Next time i'll space, lol. And yes it was more like a scene but im currently working on part two which will be very climactic!!! I can't wait to post it:)