After reading sumigirl's fic, I decided to post something that I wrote as well:whistle:. I wrote this a few years back. I think it took me around 2 years to finish writing. There's probably still lots of grammar mistakes in it but hope you guys enjoy it! XD

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3031807/1/bDeath_b_bShan_bt_bDo_b_bUs_b_bPart_b

As always, comments are always welcome, here or right on fanfiction.

PS: you should post your story on that site if you haven't yet sumigirl, people will give you tips on how to write better.

Very nicely done. I never followed Inuyasha, but I felt the heavy setting and blue atmosphere. It was a tragedy, to put it simply. As I mentioned I don't really know the show, but if I remember correctly I think the characters in your fan fiction seemed to be quite compatible to the original. It's always a big story when one of the main character dies, except in dragonball... where they can just wish Goku back from dead. ahah. I first didn't want to read it, but the last part of your story was very memorable.

Did you read the all 22chapters in such a short time? I'm impressed! When I wrote that story, I actually didn't know much about inuyasha. I watched like 2-3episodes on ytv and knew the background of it a little. I watched a few more episodes and read some of the other fanfictions on the site to get the characters' personalities down and started writing from there. I actually did some reading on wiki about the series before I decided to use it as the basis for that fanfiction. I actually consider DB but they already had a premade version of the underworld and a whole series dedicated to goku's childhood.

actually... i only read the first one... didn't even realize there were 22 of them. hehe.

Oh, haha. Yeah there are 22 chapters. It's more of a short novel than a short story I guess. It wouldn't take me 2years to write 2 pages.:heh:

Oo... pretty cool, pretty cool. I like the way you write actually... it's very easy to read, and not boring. :heh: