Well... Before anything starts, I have to say I'm Spanish, so sorry for the coming sintax mistakes.

Ok, now I can start with this. This song is the first one I upload (but not the first I compose). I'm kind of newbie with MIDIs. Hope u enjoy it.
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Welcome to Ichigo's!

I can tell you're still new at music composition. Before I attempt to further comment, can I ask what your musical background is?

I have no music background. None at all xD.

In fact, I'm interested in learning how to play the Viollin, but I've never had time, so... Just killing boredom.

Ah, then it'd be a little difficult for me to try to work with you comment wise. In a few days/weeks I'll be starting up some lessons for beginners who are interested in music composition. This would be something that you would really benifit from so I suggest that when I release the first lesson you give it a shot. In the mean time, I suggest searching for lessons in music theory to help give yourself some background knoweledge. Try this site out: http://www.musictheory.net/

Keep playing around though! That's how you learn and improve!