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dragger48
November 11th, 2011, 07:49 pm
Hey guys,
First of all, I want to give out props to everyone who put their Songs up here, they are really great.

I started writing this song ages ago, but I wasn't able to finish it up. Someday the rest of it just popped out. So here it is.
It is called 'My Way'. It is about everyone telling me not to pursue Music for a living, but I did my thing, and it really worked for me :)
It is not classical, but I hope you enjoy it anyway :)

Please, tell me what you think about this song, and honestly :). Everything is appreciated ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JwDdtqw4tLE

Thanks
Dra

Nyu001
November 16th, 2011, 12:52 am
Nice, some vocals!

To me the track sounds like it is missing something in the background... maybe is how it was mixed that is not glued all well. Or maybe I am wanting to hear background vocals giving harmonic support more often, lol.

PorscheGTIII
November 19th, 2011, 04:12 pm
Ichigo's isn't limited to classical! It's great to hear other genre's around here. We need more variety!

The track sounds great dude! It's put together very well. I hope we'll get to hear more things from you!

Giles
December 26th, 2011, 08:30 pm
To me the track sounds like it is missing something in the background

I agree. Not sure as to what to add, maybe more bkgd vocals like Nyu suggested. Otherwise, from a mixing standpoint, the hand drums sound like they're panned a little too far to the left (like 60L or something). That's just me though. Maybe a louder piano or bass would make the middle/middle-right sound as full as the left.

It's a great track though, I like it!

Ander
January 5th, 2012, 06:39 am
I think the beginning is somewhat weak compare to the rest of the song. I think it's the drum. I think it was a little too loud. perhaps weak is not the best choice of word. maybe... too rough? It'd been better if you had "eased" in... you know... give people some time to feel the beat and soak up the atmosphere. Also what Nyu said about harmony.

honestly... i think it's a great song. "my way"... i just heard that as i am commenting. ^^