the song is good, but i havent really timed it right and played it properly but ill repost a finished one later on. Doesn't have a name for it yet too. Still pretty new. TEll me if ya like it or not.

It sounds weird at times.. like some notes don't belong there. I think it's also too excessive, don't know how to explain that but eh. I liked the beginning more than the rest of this song.

Yay, another composer! =) So you performed it on a keyboard and recorded it? I wish I could do that sometimes . .

I liked: the consistent mood/style/accompaniment, the flow and movement, how it was never boring, and its rhythmic "funness"

I didn't like: the middle part (because it didn't have the same sense of direction as the beginning) and the ending (a bit too abrupt and sudden)

Good job on a first composition!

i think it was excellent. the low part in the center doesnt really fit, but the rest is incredible. :D

ill fix song with time. also the begining is my favortie part and the middle, its just not as good. well, thanks for the replies so far.

Hey, I like this one! Except for the ending, which was a bit of a letdown.

Live recording? The smushed notes sounded really nice :D

I didn't like it much. To me it gave me a waltz feeling with the bass line jumping, but it's not a waltz. the middle i thought wasn't good at all, neither was the ending. the beg. was pretty good but over all i thought it wasn't good.

I liked it, you had a nice job with the melody, but then it got way to repetitive, and exspecially the left hand. 8/10

finally done it, but i still think it may dissapoint many.
May even suck more than ever. hehe

I like your title =P

Um . . how about not adding the drums so soon? Like, let the beginning build up by itself, then let the drums come in before or at the same time as the main melody. Just an idea =) Oh, and maybe vary the rhythm of the drums a bit, seems to me it doesn't change the whole way through =P

Everything else was fine, until the ending. I thought you were doing a good job of leading up to the finish, but then it got caught off o.0 . . maybe it was because the file got corrupted, hmm =\

I would definately change the drums. They should either be taken out altogether, or changed and put in later. I think it would sound alot better if at the parts when the instruments, exept the drums, stop, if it were total silence instead of continuing on with the drums. The melody is pretty solid though.