Konnichiwa. Here is my first composition. I hope you will like. please tell if it good. Arigatou

Nice! The swirling background drone adds a nice touch. :)

It's very dramatic and has a great title! I think that the phrasing might need a bit of touching up in the first 1/4th or so, but after that it just gets better.

What's the origin of the name for it? Your instrument choice is very fitting, as well. I like how the piuano is broken chords for the first half or so, and near the middle the melody it supports is great.

The low drone strings ("warm" sfx, perhaps?) get a bit overbearing at some parts, but other than that it's great.

I look forward to hearing more of your compositions!

Your cadences for each "mini-section" are good, but I'm a bit iffy about having the whole music stop briefly for that one second, if you know what I mean. Still, you somehow managed to keep it flowing, i.e. it didn't stick out like a sore thumb.

So overall your song is very nice =) and I also agree with what Gnomish said!

Well the name from it came from someone in my school who is one of the best piano players in our school. He goes to competetions alot too. he heard it too and he said it kind of has a deep feel to it. but other then that it is a random name I came up with. Thanks everyone