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Miali
January 7th, 2005, 08:36 pm
OK, I know this is kinda rubbish. I'm sorry :heh: It's the first one I've posted here... and I'm currently struggling... I like the way it's started personally... but at the very least, I know I need to introduce a main melody and develop it... but I've posted this just to see what you all think. A good start or a bad one??? I know it ends kind of abruptly... but... hey...
Thanks for your time!
Mi.

Noir7
January 7th, 2005, 10:15 pm
Well, for a first composition it has a pretty good base and beat, you just keep developing a melody and some variety and I'm sure you will be happy with it.

Al
January 8th, 2005, 12:09 am
A very good start indeed . . I didn't realize you only composed the beginning and stopped right after . . boy was I shocked! Hurry and write some more, then post the finished version for us to hear!

MickeyB
January 8th, 2005, 01:33 pm
wow... it seems that the componists here are so gfted...:rolleyes:
How many hours do you spend to write your first composition Miali ?