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Moebius
May 22nd, 2004, 05:09 am
I composed this a long time ago, but was too lazy to finish it. At first, I liked this particular one a lot, but now I think it's not even worth finishing. Any comments?

Sorry for the bad midi, I was too lazy to insert dynamics.. I don't have a synthesizer/keyboard/sequencer, so I had to rely on stupid NoteWorthy Composer to manually insert the notes one-by-one. There are a few mistakes here and there as well because I'm a careless moron.

Any feedback would be much appreciated.

Moebius
May 22nd, 2004, 05:26 am
I apologize for double-posting, but I forgot that there's an earlier version of the file which I saved before making amendments to it(the pitnol4.mid I just posted is the amended piece), but there are some ideas in this file that I didn't include in pitnol4.mid ... the ideas didn't really work, hence the reason I deleted a big part of the piece.. Here it is, btw..

Noir7
June 2nd, 2004, 05:14 pm
This song starts nicely and flow on good throughout the entire piece, I definately think you should continue on it! Try add some more variation though... but great work!

sakura
June 2nd, 2004, 10:02 pm
Finish the piece! It sounds awesome so far! Also, you should submit it for the CMA for June when you're done!

Gnomish
June 2nd, 2004, 10:17 pm
I love it so far. :) Finish it!

Did you use counterpoint rules to make it or just harmony? :)

Archangel
June 2nd, 2004, 10:46 pm
i agree... finish it. why end a good start? keep it up! can't wait to hear the finish product!

Moebius
June 2nd, 2004, 11:30 pm
Hehe thanks guys.

I didn't use any counterpoint rules; I had too big of a migraine to remember counterpoint. I've actually decided not to touch this piece and leave it unfinished, though. I would like to work on something else for CMA June ^^