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Lord Pent
February 5th, 2005, 06:44 pm
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/WesTheBest/PHLogo.png

I'm making a comic series. Hope to put up the first comic soon.
(Dont worry mods, this doesnt have racism or anything like that in it)

Lord Pent
February 5th, 2005, 07:20 pm
Comic 1: (Warning: Suggestive material...I think)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/WesTheBest/PHComic1.png

Yoshinobu
February 5th, 2005, 07:23 pm
^^ Hehe, webcomics are always fun.

Eternal
February 5th, 2005, 07:41 pm
soo cute&#33; >.<

Roy Mustang
February 5th, 2005, 10:18 pm
LMAO XD That was good.

Neko Koneko
February 5th, 2005, 10:33 pm
Try using a different program than Paint though.

Madmazda86
February 5th, 2005, 11:06 pm
Hehehe, I&#39;m liking that&#33;

Zero X
February 5th, 2005, 11:29 pm
Wahahahaha&#33;&#33;&#33;That&#39;s SUPER CUTE&#33; Keep improving... :)
Hope you&#39;re better in cdrawing comics&#33; :D

Lord Pent
February 6th, 2005, 12:06 am
What paint program do you suggest?

Neko Koneko
February 6th, 2005, 12:11 am
Paint shop Pro or PS would be an improvement me thinks.. gives you nicer lines and such, Paint doesn&#39;t use anti-aliasing or anything of the sort, giving you jagged edges.

Gand
February 6th, 2005, 09:02 am
Originally posted by Angelic@Feb 5 2005, 06:11 PM
Paint shop Pro or PS would be an improvement me thinks.. gives you nicer lines and such, Paint doesn&#39;t use anti-aliasing or anything of the sort, giving you jagged edges.
plus (at least with photoshop) you can use layers, which will help you tremendously when doing web comics... you can put the background on one layer, each character on thier own, text on a different one, and move stuff around without having to redraw everything.

Lord Pent
February 6th, 2005, 07:16 pm
http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas/

Alright, comic 2 is out. :D

Zero X
February 7th, 2005, 01:19 am
Wahaha&#33;&#33;&#33; :lol:
Thats great&#33; I wonder what&#39;s next? :shifty:

Eternal
February 7th, 2005, 01:23 am
ROFL&#33;
SOOO CUTE&#33;&#33;
whaaa&#33;

Lord Pent
February 7th, 2005, 02:57 am
(My site has a new look now, check it out)

Could you guys post comments on my site too? That&#39;d be a big help. ^_^

Sora
February 7th, 2005, 03:06 am
:lol: Thats funny&#33; :lol:

Neko Koneko
February 7th, 2005, 06:37 am
I don&#39;t find the second one funny to be honest.. :mellow:

Roy Mustang
February 7th, 2005, 07:10 am
Originally posted by Angelic@Feb 7 2005, 06:37 PM
I don&#39;t find the second one funny to be honest.. :mellow:
Agreed. The second one wasn&#39;t up the the standard of the first one. :mellow:

Lord Pent
February 8th, 2005, 12:51 am
You guys are hard to please. Doesnt anyone like random humor anymore?
Ah well. Here&#39;s comic 3.

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas

Dark Bring
February 8th, 2005, 01:26 am
:ph34r:

Sora
February 8th, 2005, 01:45 am
I did not like the british one.... -_-

Zero X
February 8th, 2005, 02:11 am
Hmmm....Not funny to me...even comic 2 was better than comic 3.
Tried to be creative...think a way.
Don&#39;t be nervous or hasty it&#39;ll make the comic uninteresting. :think:
Calm down, think then draw.(Even it took a long time)
I can also draw comics, just lazy to think...
(Also some people think i draw the worst graphic, cause it just...plain.Also i&#39;m quite hasty and nervous.) :sweatdrop:

Lord Pent
February 8th, 2005, 02:47 am
Geez....What do you people want to see? :(

Zero X
February 8th, 2005, 03:41 am
1)Make the story longer, be creative about the happenings.
Don&#39;t just let your character only standing, and only talking or less moving, it&#39;ll be like the cartoon character who was telling about the boring jokes, making the audience boring.
They must do some action&#33; If you&#39;re creative, it&#39;ll be better.
Such as


If you launch a missile up in the air tried to shoot down a helicopter above you, and you fail because it is out of fuel, because of gravity, it&#39;ll fall on YOU&#33;
Just like that...so be creative.(I&#39;ll draw one later.) ^_^

OR

2)You can show it to your friend, let them give you the suggestion.
I asked one of my friend, he said my graphic&#39;s too plain but the story is good.
So find one of your best friend, or friend, to receive some suggestions. Then, you&#39;ll be better than before, try it. ^_^ It works on me.

Lord Pent
February 8th, 2005, 03:50 am
It&#39;s just a simple comic strip; there isnt a storyline. @_@
And lets see your comic then if you&#39;re so damn hot. C&#39;mon&#33; Show us your comics&#33; I dare ya. Now sit down lest you be reconsiled. :death:

Just kidding, but seriously, it&#39;s just a random comic. Y&#39;all shouldnt look into it for depth or storyline or anything like that. :(

Zero X
February 8th, 2005, 04:01 am
Originally posted by Lord Pent@Feb 8 2005, 12:50 PM
It&#39;s just a simple comic strip; there isnt a storyline. @_@
And lets see your comic then if you&#39;re so damn hot. C&#39;mon&#33; Show us your comics&#33; I dare ya. Now sit down lest you be reconsiled. :death:

Just kidding, but seriously, it&#39;s just a random comic. Y&#39;all shouldnt look into it for depth or storyline or anything like that.
:shifty: I told you...i&#39;ll show one comic to you guys later.(Maybe tomorrow since i began now)

By the way, even a simple script of comic, try to draw them with some action, instead of just only talking&#33; You can make creative joke if you like. :)
If you&#39;re a new comic artist, you&#39;ll get use to it and you&#39;ll be better.
When i was a new one, mine was not funny.
But i got use to it.
Keep praticing and you&#39;ll be great&#33; :)

Lord Pent
February 8th, 2005, 05:06 am
Alright whatever. Here&#39;s a new one I think you guys will like. It&#39;s unoffensive and to the point.

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas

Zero X
February 8th, 2005, 07:56 am
That&#39;s more like it&#33;
That&#39;s more funny&#33;
And you&#39;re improving&#33;
Keep it up and you&#39;ll be good&#33; :)

Lord Pent
February 8th, 2005, 11:26 pm
Thanks Zero
I appreciate that comment
I&#39;ll be uploading a new comic today
See, I can talk in an annoying way too.
;)

Sondagger
February 9th, 2005, 12:04 am
That&#39;s good stuff Pent&#33;

Its really funny. I especially like the first one you did.

Lord Pent
February 9th, 2005, 12:42 am
Thanks. I&#39;ve tried a bunch of different comics with different joke-styles (in so many words) to see which one everyone likes best. After advertising to different sites, I&#39;m getting mixed results. @_@
Okay, so on SATURDAY I will have a couple more comics up. You can all vote for which one you liked best and I&#39;ll try to make the new comics like that one. ;)

Lord Pent
February 9th, 2005, 05:11 am
Okay, I made 3-parter comic. I&#39;ve uploaded part 1.

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas

I wont post another comic until Friday. On Friday I&#39;ll post parts 2 and 3.
Enjoy. (You sorta had to have played FF7 to get it)

(BTW: My friend, Nick, convinced me into naming the town "Nickville". -_-)

Eternal
February 9th, 2005, 06:59 pm
whos the girl killed?

Neko Koneko
February 9th, 2005, 08:21 pm
Aeris.

I don&#39;t like these comics, they hardly make me smile actually. Sorry if I sound like an arse here. =/

Lord Pent
February 9th, 2005, 10:52 pm
If you dont like them then dont read them. If you have a problem with them then make a suggestion. Or else, yes, you would be an arse.

Dark Bring
February 9th, 2005, 11:22 pm
Hmm, they&#39;re okay . . . as for the application you&#39;re using, try GIMP. It&#39;s free, though it&#39;s not easy to use. :/

Lord Pent
February 10th, 2005, 03:22 am
New comic.
"The Stock Market".

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas

Lord Pent
February 10th, 2005, 04:38 am
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/WesTheBest/c1.png

Here&#39;s a comic Carnival wanted me to post. THIS IS NOT MINE.

Al
February 10th, 2005, 04:45 pm
Your cigarettes/vikoden/condom strip was the best. It had great subtle and observational humour that made the characters look dumb, but at the same time it was still smart enough for the audience. Try to stick with that approach.

Yoshinobu
February 10th, 2005, 04:48 pm
You need more jokes. Things which make people laugh, or at least smile.

Neko Koneko
February 10th, 2005, 06:20 pm
Indeed, a lot of them are just people randomly being stabbed without there really being a good ending to it. That&#39;s not funny. If I want to see random people getting killed I&#39;ll watch some random horror film. If I want to see something poorly drawn I&#39;ll let my cousin draw something. Webcomics like this are supposed to be funny - that&#39;s all there can be to it anyway. Your comics are just not funny, try some jokes (like the good concious being stuck in the traffic, that one made me laugh) and cut down on the random crap like VAMPIRES~&#33; and the random stabbing.

Zero X
February 10th, 2005, 11:27 pm
Ok Loard Pent, this is the comic i&#39;ve drawn. Observe carefully, and tried to be creative.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Comic1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Comic2.jpg

If you think these are not funny enough, you might have a chance to be more creative, because you know that other people had some problems,too. :)

Lord Pent
February 10th, 2005, 11:47 pm
Damnit, you guys are too harsh. I&#39;m not frickin God, I dont have the power to make everyone laugh at will. Oh well, 430 hits in just a couple days. Apparently SOMEBODY likes my comics. -_-

I&#39;ll try to keep up with clever humor, but if you cant see the humor in random crap then I&#39;m not sure if I can help you. :(

By the way, new comic. I think you guys might appreciate this one more because it isnt random and nobody dies...

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas

Al
February 11th, 2005, 02:41 am
XD that was great . . not many people can take something negative and turn it into something positive.

Neko Koneko
February 11th, 2005, 05:38 am
Originally posted by Lord Pent@Feb 11 2005, 01:47 AM
Damnit, you guys are too harsh. I&#39;m not frickin God, I dont have the power to make everyone laugh at will. Oh well, 430 hits in just a couple days. Apparently SOMEBODY likes my comics. -_-

I&#39;ll try to keep up with clever humor, but if you cant see the humor in random crap then I&#39;m not sure if I can help you. :(

By the way, new comic. I think you guys might appreciate this one more because it isnt random and nobody dies...

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas
Hey, I could get 430 hits if I got people from forums I know to see every comic I put online =P

Lord Pent
February 11th, 2005, 06:03 am
Well if they&#39;re so bad then why do you keep coming back? Obviously some people like them if they keep coming to my site even after the critiques.

Dark Bring
February 11th, 2005, 02:00 pm
Hmm, your comics may not be hilarious, but they still bring a smile to my face. =P Different people like different things.

Lord Pent
February 12th, 2005, 12:03 am
Eh....good enough. At least everyone else besides Ichigos likes them.

Sora
February 12th, 2005, 01:20 am
I liked the Angel&Devil one. I thought it was funny. :lol:

Lord Pent
February 12th, 2005, 04:07 am
Yeah, well what&#39;s funny to some people is bad to other because I was copying an old joke. -_-
Cant really win here can I?

http://www.drunkduck.com/EXTREME_Playa_Hatas/

I changed my site a little. Added some navbar buttons.
A new comic too.

"The Bushinary"

Considering how many of you doggon left-wingers reside here I figure you&#39;ll like this one. :ph34r:

Gand
February 12th, 2005, 06:28 am
XD the bushinary

Madmazda86
February 12th, 2005, 06:38 am
I quite liked the first of Zero X&#39;s comics actually - the second one didn&#39;t make much sense to me but the first one I found funny (World Wrestling Idiots XD)

MoetheChicken
February 12th, 2005, 05:48 pm
Ahhh Wesley... Your comic strip is pretty good. Some just don&#39;t work though. THe british one CLICHED&#33;&#33; How many time must I see some one make fun of the british gaurds&#33; Gahh... Well I did like the first one and seconed to that was the 8th. Keep workin at it&#33; And don&#39;t rip off any more jokes&#33; Wes...

Lord Pent
February 12th, 2005, 05:53 pm
Whoah, Moe, havent seen you around here for a while. Were you taking some sort of internet fast or something?

Geez...I rip-off one or two comics and everyone is on me about it. I wont do it again, dang...

Carnival
February 12th, 2005, 08:02 pm
Ok, anybody think this is even in the sightest way funny?

(I have Lord Pent&#39;s permission)

Madmazda86
February 12th, 2005, 08:04 pm
Not hugely... :huh:

Zero
February 12th, 2005, 08:07 pm
Nah, doesn&#39;t appeal to me at all to be honest. :mellow:

Noir7
February 12th, 2005, 09:33 pm
I didn&#39;t get that one. In fact, I don&#39;t see what people like in these comics.

Neko Koneko
February 12th, 2005, 09:50 pm
random stabbing is t3h shi7

Dark Bring
February 12th, 2005, 10:25 pm
XD

Who am I to judge? XD

Lord Pent
February 13th, 2005, 06:11 pm
Okay, new comic update. It&#39;s really just a filler, but I&#39;ll have a good one for tomorrow (Valentine&#39;s Day)

Lord Pent
February 16th, 2005, 01:27 am
New comic update. =)

Theshadowofdoubt
February 16th, 2005, 01:39 am
ROTGWLMAO

Lord Pent
February 16th, 2005, 02:33 am
*sarcasm detector explodes*

Theshadowofdoubt
February 16th, 2005, 02:38 am
*gathers the pieces and hands them back to Pent still laughing at the monkey* It really wasn&#39;t that funny but I liked it.

Lord Pent
February 16th, 2005, 04:56 am
Well, as long as it was entertaining. I think you&#39;ll all like tomorrow&#39;s episode: The Little Boy in the Microwave. :D

Lord Pent
February 17th, 2005, 12:49 am
Alright, #13: "The Little Boy in the Microwave" is out.

Neko Koneko
February 17th, 2005, 08:44 am
We have this nice little http://forums.ichigos.com/style_images/Ichigo_Pink/p_edit.gif button you know?

Zero X
February 17th, 2005, 10:16 am
I think there might be 2 reasons why Lord Pent didn&#39;t edit. :heh:

1)Maybe he tried to make us notice it.
2)He don&#39;t know about the button.

MoetheChicken
February 17th, 2005, 11:53 pm
Little boy in the microwave? <_< ... Well the chug one was kinda funny...

Lord Pent
February 18th, 2005, 02:24 am
What? You dont like the little boy in the microwave?
Ha, you&#39;re probbably jealous because he&#39;s taller than you, Nathan. :P

Lord Pent
February 23rd, 2005, 02:10 am
Well, anyways, new comic.
It&#39;s about FF7. Does anyone know when that movie comes out anyways?

Neko Koneko
February 23rd, 2005, 07:49 am
Ignoring my warning eh? Stop double posting. If people are interested in your comic they&#39;ll check for updates themselves. Next time this thread will be dead.

MoetheChicken
February 23rd, 2005, 11:22 pm
Ha ha&#33; You got threatened&#33; And don&#39;t call me by my real name, I only call you wes because the information&#39;s already there. No one may know my identity. Oh and I strongly resent that height comment. I&#39;ll be taller than you one day... they&#39;ll see... True this FF7 Black Magic comic was my IDEA but the actual comic itself wasn&#39;t meant to be like that... it&#39;s so racist... the epitomy of racism... you should be smote for your insolence... The mustache one was kinda funney... You need to summerize your comics a bit more. They&#39;re all about a page long. Racist...

Lord Pent
March 21st, 2005, 06:47 pm
New season. #28 might be offensive to some people, so I&#39;m warning y&#39;all.

Neko Koneko
March 21st, 2005, 07:23 pm
That&#39;s not just offensive, that&#39;s just plain sick.

Yoshinobu
March 21st, 2005, 07:28 pm
o_O I don&#39;t get it.

Neko Koneko
March 21st, 2005, 07:32 pm
It&#39;s also not funny >.>

Lord Pent
March 21st, 2005, 10:55 pm
You sure like to rag on my comics, dont you Angelic? I told you if you dont like them then dont read them.

Neko Koneko
March 22nd, 2005, 07:45 am
I&#39;m just saying your most recent addition is just plain sick. I&#39;m actually considering closing this thread if more of that crap comes up. That&#39;s why I look through it now and then, because I have to see if they don&#39;t violate any of the forum rules.

MoetheChicken
March 25th, 2005, 11:46 pm
You sure like to rag on my comics, dont you Angelic?
Wes, everybody likes to rag on your comics... XD
Go ahead and close the sick little thread&#33; He&#39;s already been warned about other stuff&#33; No more warnings; more closings&#33;

Lord Pent
March 26th, 2005, 02:34 am
Some friend you are. <_<

Neko Koneko
March 26th, 2005, 07:56 am
Well, we don&#39;t make jokes about cancer and we don&#39;t have sex with our mums.. so.. yeah :whistle:

tourist
April 1st, 2005, 09:17 am
Hmm....was looking through your comics and I&#39;m sorry. I didn&#39;t find ONE that made me chuckle.