Hi all!!! :D

This was my first visit to this site!!!
I find this site really great!!!!I love it!! :P

And this is my first song i made on Final 2005 :D a very enxpensive program i know.
Plz vote my song i dont know how good its heard!!! :think:

If its heard good i can add more of my compositions songs!!! :D

I hope its herad good!!! Its a piano song.

Hey, I thought you were me, or me was you.. or something of the kind OÔ;

Anyway, the song seemed a little dull. It feels empty somehow, and I think it is because of the contant 1-2-3 bass notes. You might want to change that into something more exiting. I know it's a slow song, but still, something needs to be done to keep the listener interested =>

well first off. how much did u pay for finale 2005. i just bought it off of the site for $25. now i dont know if there is more on the really expensive one but. and can u put the songs on midi with your version of it? well i can with mine. its alittle easier for ppl to hear it on this site.

now about the song. id say noir7 is right. :o too many noirs o well ^_^ he said its alittle dull. not that thats a bad thing though. but for a first song its good.

for a first song id give it a 7.5/10

And if u can't put it on midi do u want me to because i can if u want?

HI
I Know it´s my first song and i must work harder on it!!!
Thx for the vote, but i can put it too in a midi !
But its better if i put it on a mp3 or wave, because my Final 2005 can do it ! ^_^
I pay 499 euro its a europe money for Final 2005!

Do you want it in a mp3 or wave? If yes answer me i do it now :D

i dont care which one :D

It's really good, considered that it's your first composition ^_^
The theme is nice, but there are some parts that just sound wrong, you should get rid of some dissonances ;)

HI

So i have put this song in to a mp3 file and have a new composition song :D

I hope it is good and plz vote my second song!

I dont know how good is it!


So the first song in to mp3

And here the new second one

Thank you for putting it into mp3!

Secret Ichigo:
Actually, I didn't mind the dissonance, and the mood was pretty good. You might not want to repeat the three chords too much though. It wasn't dull, but it just needs more variety, like you did at the end.

Last Minute:
Nice and flowing. I liked how you put in the chords for contrast as well as for accentuation of the point you wanted to make at those sections. Just let us know where you're going with the music.

I love both are you songs keep up the good work! :)

HI

Thanks for the voting for my songs and your commenting!!! :D

I just working on a new composition from me !!! :)

But i don´t know how much time i need to finish it :heh:

So i would do the best to finish my new songs!!!


P.s. And about the music were i going with it :think:
Puh X_X i don´t know the answer yet but let me think :sweatdrop:

HI

I have a new composition from me, but the problem is i don´t correct it finish maybe the song have some mistake (MAYBE) !!! :D
I found it under my hidden folder :heh:

I hope is heard good and plz vote !!! ^_^

My opinion: I find the song is really nice and thinkful.

Maybe it's just me, but sometimes the dynamics felt too sudden and loud. Other than that, I liked the emotional aspect of the piece. I can tell you're a fan of Kajiura music. Soon you'll develop your own unique style ^^

I love them!!!!
I thought Secret Ichigo was really sweet. Expecially the beginning part. They are all good!

Alone at the window

It's a little too slow, and in my opinion slow songs evolve slow and repeated some parts at the beggining which I wouldn't have bothered to do. The ending was pretty good too.

Overall, I think some extra instruments could be added, it would give the song a nice boost.
Actually, instead of starting a new song I think it would be a good idea to add on to this song. I suggest to put in some new instruments, violin would be a plus.

7/10

HI all

I have 2 new compositions songs from me, hope you enjoy the songs and please vote ! :D

More songs are coming soon !! ^_^

P.s Thx for all the comments
And about the question :Yes "Al" i am a kajiura fan!
And the song "Alone at the window"
I am trying to rec. this song with a violin and piano
"Sarkurah" But i need more time !! XD


The first song: This song is very nice.

And the second song:

i really enjoyed the "pain in love". i liked the chords since it had a similar style as mine. the second piece i thought was too slow and it was too dull.

pain in love 7.5/10
at the night without light 6.5/10

There isn't anything I can really pick at. They both sound lovely, keep up the good work =)

They sound pretty solid, but I think you should add some pedaling instead of just relying on the ambient reverb. Some more tempo/dynamic changes would help humanize it some more too, if possible.

Hi all! :D Thx for the comments!

I have a new composition from me! It´s call "Rain at the world"!

I want to compose more songs, but im too busy at the moment![At school]
So more songs coming later!

I hope you enjoy the song and like it and please vote (I had to know how good it is)! :heh:

Cu all

Oh please be careful, from around 0:42 - 1:04, the melody sounds very much like one of the songs from Noir the anime =T too bad I don't remember the name nor do I have it anymore, but that song I'm thinking about has piano + percussion and perhaps some others. So try to fix it up. I know that when we listen to songs we love (in this case, I'm assuming music from the anime, since you seem to be a big fan), they sometimes unsconsciously enter our own music. Other than that, your song was pretty good, the melody was clear and everything =)

HI!

Ops, XD
Yes "Al" its true you remember me, that one of the part of the song from me has a same style from around 0:42 - 1:04 !Oh man i forgot it Sry! :(
I try to fix it and add more songs later , because im to busy at the moment!

And "Al" the song is called "Silent Pain"!!!To remember you on that ! :P

cu!

HI all.

So I have a new composition song! :D

It´s call "No Pain"

Instrument: Piano + Violin

I hope you relax or enjoy the song I compose ^^ :D

More songs coming soon ! :P

No Pain

Wow! The reverb in this piece is a tad overbearing, but it does sort of dull (for the better) the shrill and unrealistic violin soundfont! :P (Not meant to be negative so far, that's just my first impression!)
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Anyway, now to the good stuff. I like how the piano part intermingles with the violin's solemn melody in the first half by putting in little parts of its own in between the long tied notes. Also, once the RH really kicks in at about halfway through, it provides a great counterpart to the violin part. :) The violin notes are held just perfectly and cut off at just the right beat, IMO. Sometimes it's hard to tell which is the true melodic line, the violin or piano; I think at the same time, they both are and aren't the melody, and that's a great sign of compositional talent and technique! Near the end, when the violin is very soft, the piano parts just sweeps me off to a new, care-free (but somewhat melancholic) world. I love the name, and the fade-out in the violin part near the end is wonderfully orchestrated. :) I think this is a beautiful piece, and I look forward to hearing more of your compositions as you progress, because you have quite the little bag of explosive talent horded inside that mind of yours.

Keep it up, Noir!

Indeed, this is a wonderful piece. Your piano part, with its flowing nature and flawless harmony, complements the violin melody well. The counterpart between the two is also executed well, because you took care not to mix them so much as to be indistinguishable.

Rain at the world is a beautiful song. Too bad if that part around 0:42 through 1:04 is from something esle it was one of my favorate parts, but im sure you could come up with something to top it. never the less I enjoyed the whole song. :D

No pain. yet another excellent song of yours. I dont really care about the soundfont. with the worst soundfont it would still be enjoyable.

I thank you all for the comments :D

But one question?
Are the soundfont from the violin so bad or just unrealistic? : :P
Maybe i try to get a new one but i do it later! (Short of time) XD
I will post new songs from me soon! :)

Can anyone close my thread please!
Because I want to open a new one ! Thanks :)

Fifth closure. *double sigh*