This is my C.B. comic series.
I drawed this when i'm a bit bored.
Read the information below to understand more. :D
(You can skip it if you felt a bit lazy or think it's no good.)

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What is C.B.?
C.B. represents Counter Bomber. It was the place for study and fighting for teenagers only.They'll give missions to them for challenge and defeat evils!
(Some mission are too crazy!)

Why the name is C.B.?
Because of the most evil army, "Evil Army", wanted to destroy and rule the world, and the leader is "Daneo" who was also a teenager. In order to defeat him, C.B. was created. Although there are only about less than 20 members, but they won the battle and even complete their mission. So they called C.B.
"Counter" for kick back the Evils.
"Bomber" meant by Different Strength.

What are the characters?

Mike-
The rude, but strong S-rank member. He used his sword to kill evils with his superior strength! He had only 3 hairs because his hair got burnt 3 years ago! BUT will grow back if he used a special tech.

Kaylie-
The only girl as a C.B. member. The childish but kind and talented young girl from Japan, worked together with the members as a team. She was good at language, also she had a special ability to cast magic! Her luck was good sometimes. For some reason, Mike was being nice to her and Mike was her first friend.

Felix-
Mike's friend who used his sword and also good at using a robot he designed.
He can squish the Evil Army like ants with his robot.

Wormmie-
The worm genius. This worm is not as babaric and as small as other "Worms" from "Worms War". Its size is as big as human and had a giant brain. His explosive guns and bazooka will shoot the enemies away! Kaboom! Unfortunately, he's one unlucky worm!

Rocky-
The WWI(World Wrestling Idiot) champion! He'll use the style of WWI and also the strongest member of all. However, he had poor sense of direction.

Crazy-
Crazy was a N-U-T, NUTS! He's the craziest and the most idiotic person in the world! But...his bombs might blast the enemies into pieces! Also sometimes, he was quite useful to other members.

H.C.-
H.C represents Hack Caller, since his name was weird, they called him H.C. instead. He likes a lot of beutiful and cute girls normally. Don't think he's weak! If he's serious,you're killed by his summon. Even you're a cute,pretty but evil girl, he'll show no mercy!

Calvin-
The rock-and-roll player! He'll use his music to lure some girls. But in battle, he'll use it as a super attack! It's quite deadly too...

Zack-
The martial art master! He's calm and cold-hearted. He'll show no mercy once he was serious with his supreme martial arts!

General-
Leader of C.B. He's like a teacher giving them trainings and teachings.

Special Characters-
Some of them are from anime, such as Card Captor Sakura, Digimon, Star Ocean EX, Naruto and others! (Temporary most of the time.)


That's all.... :D
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Hope you enjoy the comic...
Although i think it's a bit messy but hope you like it, and i hope you give me some replies. :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg5.jpg
*Updated at 17th February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg6.jpg
*Updated at 17th February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg7.jpg
*Updated at 18th February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg8.jpg
*Updated at 18th February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg9.jpg
*Updated at 18th February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg10.jpg
*Updated at 19th February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg11.jpg
*Updated at 21st February 2005*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg12.jpg
*Updated at 21st February 2005*

[STILL INCOMPLETE!!!]

More pages will come soon... :)

I find them quite good! :D Nice job, but I find a few missing words/grammar errors. But they are quite nice; I can't really draw too well. So your drawing beat mine!

It is funny but a bit messy XD . I like the villain part!!! :rockon:

You try to get too much on one page. Use more space, draw bigger.

Page 5 and page 6 updated! :D

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg6.jpg

[Sorry that i haven't completed it yet. A title and a comic like this needs lots of pages. If you want to know what happened next, please wait...i'll finish for sure. :heh: ]

At last I have time to reply :D You've got a good drawing style - good facial expression and action drawing. Try to draw with a sheet of paper under your wrist so you don't smudge the paper. I'd also suggest investing in a good ink pen to outline your drawings to define them better. Also with regard to speech bubbles, try and have the bubble of the first person speaking in the top left hand corner and get progressively lower/further to the right with the bubbles as others speak in reply, this way the conversation follows naturally and it makes more sense. As others have said, you need to improve on your word ordering/spelling/grammar but I'm sure that will come over time :)

You've got a nice mix of plot and humour there (loved the bit where everyone worships Kaylie's idea over that of the General's) - the first page introducing the characters was well done and most importantly you're able to distinguish between who is who in appearance and in talking (it was a good idea to put the chibi pics in the speech bubbles so you know who's saying what in a far out shot). Good perspective in the drawings, good use of the frames (liked the cannon shot that stretched over two frames) and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest!

Better than the naff cartoon I did for the Metro's December edition anyhow XD

Thanks to everyone who gave me the suggestions.
By the way, ive updated some more...
NOTE:
I've drawn Sakura from Card Captor Sakura in my style. :heh:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg7.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg8.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg9.jpg

I'll say it again: you stash too much on one page. Use squares that are twice that size for each picture but draw the same stuff in it - but then bigger. I heard comic artists often draw stuff much bigger than it'll be publiced later, just so they can pay more attention to detail.

Originally posted by Angelic@Feb 18 2005, 09:40 PM
I'll say it again: you stash too much on one page. Use squares that are twice that size for each picture but draw the same stuff in it - but then bigger. I heard comic artists often draw stuff much bigger than it'll be publiced later, just so they can pay more attention to detail.
Sorry, but my style is almost like chibi style and i don't think i can make it bigger.
But maybe...i'll do my best to make it bigger. :)

By the way....New page is updated... :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg10.jpg

It's still incomplete, so please be patient... :sweatdrop:

EDIT:

21st February 2005:
I've updated 2 pages of them! :D

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg11.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/Megabomb/Pg12.jpg