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Lord Pent
March 8th, 2005, 03:06 am
w00t w00t. I'm making a new comic series. Not comedy, but manga this time. Here's my first character:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/WesTheBest/IrisProfile2.png

I already have a guy (and his little brother) a cat-girl and an old man. I need suggestions for new characters. Anyone?

hell_xtremedawg
March 9th, 2005, 03:53 am
mm, well, we first need to know what type of manga you're makind (eg. action, adventure, drama, fantasy, romance.... etc)

There should be a comical character to relieve tension at times, or a cold and cool character similar to sesshoumaru. And maybe a character that has a strange perspective of things due to past experiences. Or maybe...... Blah, I can go on for pages, given the amount of manga i've read and anime i've seen 0_o

Lord Pent
March 10th, 2005, 04:08 am
A Sesshomaru-esque character is vital for any anime, I agree with that. I havent gotten around to making a character like that though. :/

I wanted my comic to be somewhat like Tenchi Muyo; in the sense that the main character is a guy and most of the other characters are chicks. ;)

Carnival
March 10th, 2005, 10:21 pm
How bout' you try making your own characters! :bleh:

Dark Bring
March 10th, 2005, 11:33 pm
@ Carnival: Do people around you act like this towards you when you ask them for advice? There is nothing wrong with your advice, but your delivery is lacking.
@ Lord Pent: Not being in control is half the fun of reading some else's work. Surprising others is half the fun of being on control. Nonsensical comments aside, if this is your first foray into a new medium, anything goes. I'll belabour the obvious: you'll get the feel for it later.

Lord Pent
March 11th, 2005, 05:28 pm
@ Carnival: Do people around you act like this towards you when you ask them for advice? There is nothing wrong with your advice, but your delivery is lacking.

Dont mind him, he's always an ass to me. :P
Anyways, here's another character: Jessy

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/WesTheBest/Jasmine.png

Aeris
March 13th, 2005, 11:51 am
Those are really great Pent! ^_^

MoetheChicken
March 19th, 2005, 12:11 am
No offense Wes but I strongely agree with Carnival. Still no offense but your characters lack originality! Say...how bout drawing thier whole body so we have a better Idea of what they look like.

Lord Pent
March 19th, 2005, 02:42 am
NEVAR!!!

Carnival
March 19th, 2005, 11:39 pm
w00t w00t. I'm making a new comic series. Not comedy, but manga this time. Here's my first character:

Wait, the last one was comedy!?!?!?

hehe, good one *high-fives self*

Lord Pent
March 26th, 2005, 03:16 am
YOU GUYS ARE RETARDED!
Anyways, here's the first page of my comic. It's cut-off but this is as much as I'm willing to do in one day. (And it might look a little choppy since I had to convert it to JPG for it to fit here)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/WesTheBest/Strip1.jpg

MoetheChicken
March 28th, 2005, 05:20 pm
Seems like a comedy to me!! You don't even have to read it and it's halarious

Me-1
Wes-Zip

So does this thing have a story line or is it about sterotypical manga guys and cat girls going around harrasing old men!?! About your characters, do you know what originality is?

Meer
March 28th, 2005, 06:10 pm
Reminds me too much of Black mage and White mage from 8 bit T.

Lord Pent
March 28th, 2005, 07:16 pm
The people on these forums sure are ignorant. I told you this was just the first page; it's not finished.

Meer
March 28th, 2005, 09:27 pm
I think you are taking my words a little too out of context.

I never said anything bad about it, just that it was similar to something else.

Lord Pent
March 30th, 2005, 12:00 am
Grr...The people here are so critical...

hell_xtremedawg
March 30th, 2005, 02:44 am
mm mmm, critical people are good, listen to what they say this time, since all (well most) of them here are actually trying to help you and not piss you off this time...

The opening does seem like a comedy comic to me XD

Me trying to piss you off: "This crap sucks, get a real life, and your computer drawing skills are mediocre"

Helpful way of saying ^ : "It would help to clean up the pictures a little by not using such strong colours on everything. Also, an orange sky is kind of.... strange. And the red "blush spots" on Azumay are too big. Oh, and use the straight line tool to draw the building O.o"

I'd like to see the comedy manga that you drew before :D

MoetheChicken
March 30th, 2005, 10:23 pm
"This crap sucks, get a real life, and your computer drawing skills are mediocre"
Yeah that's what I was lookin for! Just kidding...but seriously I'm not...How can you call us ignorant! Being Ignorant is that you haven't had the chance to learn. To me, when I look at your comic, you seem mighty ignorant!! Because it's an atempt to manga doesn't mean one of the characters has to be a sext neko girl wearing tight clothes. Lets see... guy with open jacket, black pants, spikey hair with highlights, Hmm wher have I seen that one?!? You really need a scanner but then again I don't think it's going to affect the drawings that much. Where's the drama! where's the storyline! where's the action! where's the originality!... Okay it's just the first page...Where's the seconed!! You should release it chapter by chapter not page by page. Think of how you read a book: You don't read only one page a day! To sum this all up: Stick to comedy... and do better on it...

Lord Pent
March 30th, 2005, 11:31 pm
Nathan you little ****wad....I'm not releasing my comic exclusively at Ichigos, this is just a sample page. :angry:
And by the way, Your brother brought his girlfriend to the bandroom today. They had freaky secks on the table.

hell_xtremedawg
March 31st, 2005, 12:59 am
Originally posted by Lord Pent@Mar 31 2005, 12:31 AM
Nathan you little ****wad....I'm not releasing my comic exclusively at Ichigos, this is just a sample page. :angry:
And by the way, Your brother brought his girlfriend to the bandroom today. They had freaky secks on the table.
=.= stop flaming your own thread

Traya
March 31st, 2005, 03:43 am
I think this thread is the joke in itself. lol >.>
I like it so far keep it up.

MoetheChicken
March 31st, 2005, 09:25 pm
DON'T USE MY REAL NAME!! Do it again and I'll stab you in your face. HA!! You don't have any comebacks to what I said (Cause it's all true!) you instead try to poke at other things! Fine then where's the full exclusive version wes!?! huh? huh? Your pathetic! ha ha ha ha haa...

Lord Pent
April 1st, 2005, 02:06 am
NATHAN NATHAN NATHAN FAG NATHAN NATHAN!

Eternity
April 1st, 2005, 02:37 am
Can you both shut up? Either a mod will close this or I will report this if it continues... so stop the constant spamming already.=_=

Neko Koneko
April 1st, 2005, 11:49 am
*closes* Pent, go fuck your mum but stay away from this place if you have nothing better to say.