Hard to beleve that when you loose everything, that you can create music so much easier... This piece (ww?) I composed when all of my friends turned against me, and seems to be the most melodic of all my compostions. Please place any comments you have on this piece (again... ww?) Thank you.

This is the MIDI sequence, though, it's not as good as the mp3's quality...

Sorry to hear about you and your friends . . but you're right, nothing like raw emotion to bring out the feelings in your music. I liked how the music flowed to reflect your thoughts . .

I love it. I know how ya feel bud. Most of my friend betrayed me too so....
I can feel the mood in your song.. its great! Keep up the good work.

Well, the harmony is really indinstinct, though maybe that's intended...? If not, you should try to spread out you chords some more, or change the velocity per chord for the heavier ones. Since it's so chord heavy, you might want to put extra emphasis on the melodic lines too. The pedal marks seem kinda glitchy too. Overall, it gives a sense of wandering without direction; but then again, it's not entirely inappropriate for the subject matter. Keep it up.

Al is right , the song reflects your thoughts nicely ^^

:heh: Yeah, I don't quite understand how the pedal works in finale yet... or chord velosity, so I couldn't change that around...