im a new composer so take it easy on my music

u done

well first your going to need to get a solid melody. But i know that is hard. I mean i never have 1 but you need to get melodys i learned that. I think That you also have to watch your chords. Like the end chord does not sound right to the song. But keep practicing you will get better.

And ill change It into midi for u. So other people can hear

i like it

ok for a first

Well, everyone's got to start somewhere, I guess....

It seems like you have an idea for a melody, or something. It's hard to say cause it sounds kind of random. The harmony doesn't really help it support it, either. And the organ was totally unnecessary (or piano; either way, you can easily play both parts with only one keyboard). There's not really much more I can say about this; I'd strongly advise you to check out the composition article (http://ichigos.com/compositionsarticle.shtml) on the main page and the resources in the Theory/Composition Tutorial thread (http://forums.ichigos.com/index.php?showtopic=1038), and use these resources to improve your abilities in writing music.

what score would u give it

do u like this one

om. i would say that it is way too random. There isnt a solid melody. When u do finally come in with chords they dont really sound right. And Spc1st is right mabye see the Theory/composition thread. It also gets kinda boring since there is non stop playing

I liked the first one better.

The second one sounds like an isolated part from an piece for many instruments an etude strictly made for practicing technique; in either case, the "musicality" feels rather limited. Try to plan out your pieces some more (here's a nice and concise tutorial (http://www.justusjohnston.com/tutorials/composition/starting.html) about just that) before actually writing the music itself (this is especially useful for people who have trouble acurrately transcribing the "song in his/her head" onto paper/the computer).

As for numerical ratings, I don't feel it's very appropriate for subjective matters such as music.

ok how do u like this

well im trying different things so how do u like this

Would it be possible to convert these all to MIDI? On another note, it's quite risky posting actual scores online, ONLYHUM3N. It'd be much safer posting MIDIs. I'd listen to them if only they were all MIDI. :/

badgerglue can u change all of my songs to midi
:poke:

Ill think about it

here i converted them to midi but i have to put them 1 post at a time :ranting: sry

Edit: i if i get confused and acudentaly put the wrong song up im sry.

here

here

game adventure, solos, i dont know how u like it:

The melody was too random and it was hard to follow along with. You barely have harmony =\ Or maybe I downloaded them wrong x.x;

thax bagerglue :rockon:

maybe you should try using only one instrument. try and get a good solid melody then worry about adding in harmonies and other parts.