Well..not my first one, but the first one I actually completed. I would have put it in midi form, but I know not how to do that yet.

What software did you use (and what year is it)? When I download it, it's incompatable with my 2002 and 2004 software.

I used 2005.

HI i can put it into a mp3 song if you want it!!! :P

So answer me !! :D

Go ahead if you want.

Hmm, it started off pretty nice and steady, but then began to deviate a lot when the 8th notes came in. I think you should've kept building on the melody/motif you established in the beginning more gradually before moving into the more "random" sounding 8th note section. You seem to have some sense of progression, so it'd be a good idea to just follow one of two main ideas instead of many in a short piece like this.

One of my lastest:

What is this ".mus"??!!
What program do I open it with?!

//D

My newly altered one: