Well I started to compose this... I had to work out the main melody with my clarinet so that kinda took me a while but this is what i have so far. Should I keep going on it??

Yes you should. Also, you should perform the final piece yourself because that way you can convey the emotion as you want to.

its good, but too short and just put a name :P

You shouldn't create a thread for every new song you write =T . . the name of your piece is dangerously similar to mine =P . . as for the piece itself, the harmony is weak because the two instruments are doubling each other (playing the same) for the most part. But by all means, continue composing! =)

ummmm notice i said i wasnt done. I dont have a name for it yet, i jus put that and i dont know wtf to do with this peice........I think the doubling up makes a cool sound....maybe its jus me. yeah it sucks

I was just kidding with you about the name =P

Doubling can be a cool sound . . but if it's the only sound, then you may be in trouble. I think doubling works best if you have other notes to support it, otherwise it's harmonically empty.

Just keep working, you'll figure out what to do next!