Hi @ all

I was long time absent, because I didn't have any time to write here or compose either. Now I'm back on and wanted to share my newly composed pieces with you.
The first one is dedicated to a character from a pen-and-paper rpg, I made. I think many of you know the manga/anime "Naruto". A friend and I made a rpg about it. My chara is an ninja girl with hairs about 4 meters long, wich she can move with her chakra like any part of the body else, like an arm, or so. That's why she call herself "Nagai Tetsukami" in English: long silverhair (her haircolor is a surreal floating and shining silver) and so is her song called.
I&#39;m looking forward to read your comments, don&#39;t be scared to deal constructive critism (I hope that was translated right :sweatdrop: <- that too... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: )

The beginning was cute ^^ but after that, it was such an interesting contrast&#33; So dramatic, very good, nice flow to everything . . actually, there isn&#39;t anything bad I about your piece that I can think of at the moment :think:

Neat piece, though I don&#39;t know how well it&#39;d fit in the Naruto setting... The harmony, instrumentation, and rhymthic feel all make it sound more like "videogame styled medieval music" instead.

It wasm&#39;t fixed so much on the naruto scenario, but just an impression of the personality of this girl. You know: This ninja is on the one hand a cute, well-behaved girl, but on the other hand a fiercefull fighte who loves to fight and the competition. Ijust tried to express that.

I know your character... ;)
I personally think the music doesn&#39;t fit her, but that&#39;s just my opinion. The music is great, though, it carries a fine atmosphere and is well orchestrated. Keep up the good work&#33;

Whoa.

This was great. I especially loved the intro and the use of the woods (especially the basoon). It set the mood so perfectly.

I don&#39;t think the music is fitting for the character, though. It sounds like it&#39;d be better suited for a villain, or maybe an evil march or something. So, consider that.

Otherwise, it was awesome. I give it a 10 out of 10. ^_^

Originally posted by Apollo XI@May 8 2005, 06:13 AM
Whoa.

This was great. I especially loved the intro and the use of the woods (especially the basoon). It set the mood so perfectly.

I don&#39;t think the music is fitting for the character, though. It sounds like it&#39;d be better suited for a villain, or maybe an evil march or something. So, consider that.

Otherwise, it was awesome. I give it a 10 out of 10. ^_^
Yes, that Evil March setting sounds good to me. It would fit perfectly&#33;&#33;&#33;