These are two of my rp characters that I decided to draw...

Hirameki Kage (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v505/XfatalXninja/hiramekikage.jpg)
ohh...the other one disappeared...i have to scan it again later...i'm not exactly home right now...

anyone have any tips for me to get better?

the hands are tiny, the knucles are at the same length, the eyes are creepy, the hair is too....the same?

i think it looks good. i'm not much of an artistic person, so i can't give any tips. has an interesting eye..

Ok....the hands are tiny....but what do you mean by the hair is the same????

oh...i got the other picture....
It's here! (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v505/XfatalXninja/mei.jpg)

The eyes are seriosly creepy, you should change them. How about making the hair move, you know, like in a breeze.

a little bit of over-shading... and yes, the eyes are creepy >_< *runs off into a corner*

Both pictures look.... dark and evil XD

If that&#39;s not an attempt at drawing anime, then it&#39;s pretty good ^^

Ok.....well....here&#39;s one of my more recent drawings....
....go here... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v505/XfatalXninja/Girl.jpg)

It&#39;s okay. I&#39;ve seen better. I think the pictures are overshaded.

The last one is much better. Looks cuter.

i think the legs need working on. they&#39;re too....the same...

pokemon people style

.... :blink: .... oooo....

Originally posted by AsianSensation_wow@Jun 19 2005, 10:20 PM
i think the legs need working on. they&#39;re too....the same...
What do you mean by that&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;? how can something be too.....the same???

oh....and the only reason i shade so much is because my friend constantly tells me that i don&#39;t shade enough......

They are too "Non-crurvy" and stiff

As for the hair, its way too uniform and the thickness if the same.

da&#33;&#33;&#33;*points to dreams creation* that&#39;s the one&#33;

Originally posted by Hirameki@Jun 20 2005, 08:14 AM
What do you mean by that&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;? how can something be too.....the same???

oh....and the only reason i shade so much is because my friend constantly tells me that i don&#39;t shade enough......
i think it&#39;s because the hands look like feeeeeeeeetttt

(Stupid PSO fans, lmfao. <3 XD Just kidding&#33;) But you need to get your drawings better. :s I mean, the legs should have some more form, and the curves everywhere else are just...off. Try going to Deviant Art or Sheezy Art and use their stock photos. ;) After all, that&#39;s why they&#39;re there&#33; And, btw, when I say use, I meant use them as models. :o As I said, that&#39;s why they&#39;re there in the first place. <3

k...thanks for the comments......well...some of them anyways... :dots:

there there *pats on back.