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dxl
June 23rd, 2005, 06:14 am
the track is called
"be asleep" with japanese relaxing drama/anime flavor

stream:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2560824&q=Hi
download:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=2560824
IF direct links dont work click
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/deluxelin_music.htm
~thank you for ur time ~

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it still needs quite a lots work... or 50% rework.... i suppose =_=
overall, i like it and and i hate it
flute will be re recoreded for sure
piano part will needed to be revised
the pizz part..... i started to hate it, but right now i donno what to do with it... couldnt get it to sound more more dyamic ...with that repeating melody as part of the drums


"the moving emotions" is another one i hate so i didnt upload on to my soundclick, it's a relaxing melodic track
with acustic drums + piano+soft pads and leads
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2560875&q=Hi
coz it just doesnt flow... :crybaby:


comments?any comments? suggestions?


"what do i like" is a ambient/downtempo track with arabic flavor
with sitar/ deep pads/ toms. a dark relaxing track... it flows!
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2560890&q=Hi

Matt
June 23rd, 2005, 05:41 pm
be asleep:
It's quite the relaxing piece. I like the simplistic melody you got here =)

the moving emotions:
ahh sorry, I'm not really into this kind of music, but maybe you should check the
breaks? it sounds kinda torn apart :/

what do I like:
hmm, would make a nice background tune in some rpg? maybe a desert theme? it get pretty repitive though. :huh:

P.S: sorry for my short comments :doh:

Klonoa
June 25th, 2005, 06:15 am
Be asleep is a pretty song. I like the techno style.

Some of your music sounds like it would be in nintendo's metriod or maybe super monkey ball actually they would fit pretty good in those games. :think:

You really know how to do the techno style. How do you make these songs\sound effects?

By the way wouldnt it be easier just to post the mp3 as an attachment, I had to sign up and everything @_@ , but it was worth it. :)